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Kosetsu
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since 2001-03-10

Posts 450
Alabama, USA

0 posted 2001-06-07 02:18 AM

Is it worth it,
To submit to love again?
To open myself up,
And let another in?

Should I break the wall of stone,
I’ve placed around my heart,
To protect myself from,
Love’s kiss, so tart?

Can I let another in,
Knowing the last was a lie,
Will this one endure,
Or leave me alone to cry?

I wish that I could know,
How to find ‘the one’,
That I could find one to love me,
And not make me their pawn.

Maybe one day,
I’ll belong to a true love story,
Maybe one day,
That love won’t be an artificial memory.

"Eat, drink, and be merry, for tomorrow we die." - Shakespeare

[This message has been edited by Kosetsu (edited 06-07-2001).]

anonymous albert ?

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since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

1 posted 2001-06-07 02:48 AM

quite the beautiful piece...and im sure you will...as i havent yet also...very wellw ritten on this subject...i liked it greatly

...bye Adam

i'm addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

DarkAngelOfTheStars
Member

since 2001-04-21

Posts 255

2 posted 2001-06-07 01:17 PM

aww such a sweet poem

Dont knock on deaths door ...... ring the bell and run......he hates that

fractal007
Senior Member

since 2000-06-01

Posts 1958

3 posted 2001-06-07 01:39 PM

It is rather ironic that I happened to find this post and start reading while something of a similar context was happening to me... LOL

Anyhow, I really enjoyed the poem. I think there are many out there who would like nothing more than to have your love, rather than to extort you or play mindgames with you.

"If history is to change, let it change. If the world is to be destroyed, so be it. If my fate is to die, I must simply laugh"

-- Magus

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

4 posted 2001-06-07 02:46 PM

You can never tell what is gonna happen...you just have to cross your fingers and wish for the best.

HeAvEnS AnGeL
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since 2001-05-17

Posts 168
The Hot Girl From Canada

5 posted 2001-06-07 03:07 PM

This was a very beatiful poem. I hope you don't mind if I tuck it inot my library. Keep smiling hunny

Don't judge a person untill you have walked a mile in their shoes, this way your a mile away from them, and you have their shoes.
Whatever tomorrow b

~sugarpie313~
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since 2000-09-14

Posts 375
Maine, USA

6 posted 2001-06-07 05:55 PM

I love this! such a wonderful job in expressing everything. i can relate lol

Valerie

Why do you do what u do to me baby...you know if I could I'd do anything for you, please don't ignore me cause you know I adore you

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

7 posted 2001-06-09 06:52 PM

Weird how you, me, and frac are going through this. I chose to let her in though. I don't know if it was wise or but it was worth a try.
I enjoyed this one!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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