Teen Poetry #4 |
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Don't Let Me Down |
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Suga_Baby Member
since 2000-08-06
Posts 380Maine, USA ![]() |
staring out my window dark, ominous clouds thunder, lightning eveywhere rain pouring down pounding loudly on the roof a single violent sound lighting splitting up the sky trees, by wind, bent down and then it happened... the clouds began to part sun shone brightly on me now in the sky the fading rain paints a brilliant rainbow down the storm is finally over and I no longer frown though I smile wide, I think-- please don’t let me down "A dream is a wish your heart makes while you are fast asleep." |
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anonymous albert ?![]()
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
great use imagery..i liked it a lot...and its nice to see you post again ![]() ![]() i'm addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? [This message has been edited by anonymous albert ? (edited 06-07-2001).] |
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keoni Senior Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 850Up in the mountains in the NFC |
This was very nice. I liked the imagery alot also. Very descriptive and colorful. It's been awhile since I've seen you around, good to see you back. Jon "Your anger is a gift"-Rage Against The Machine |
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DarkAngelOfTheStars Member
since 2001-04-21
Posts 255 |
hehe very cute i loved it ![]() Dont knock on deaths door ...... ring the bell and run......he hates that |
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Great job here!!! I really liked this one!!! You did so well. ![]() I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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