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PiXiEpUnKeR Junior Member
since 2001-06-06
Posts 49IL, USA |
If I die this very moment, I would not fret, for I have never felt, so complete, so content. I have felt your presence on me, I vanish in your kiss, so if I die this very moment, there'd be nothing here to miss. We are now forced to part, our pain is mutually felt, so if I die this very moment, no more troubles shall be dealt. I hear your heart scream, its too hard to open my eyes, but if I die this very moment, promise me not to cry. I wouldn't want to leave you, but being apart is just the same, so if I die this very moment, please dont fill your heart with pain. No one can hold back your visits, unlimited journeys to my grave-side, so if I die this very moment, I know our love is always alive. |
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HVNsnt82086 Junior Member
since 2001-06-05
Posts 30United States |
*SNIFF* What a beautiful poem! I can tell you'll be a great adition to the Passions family! Welcome! The poem is amazing, and I know it's strait from the heart! I'm looking forward to reading more!! |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
  WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!! so if I die this very moment, I know our love is always alive. wow....this is one very sweet first post!!...made me want to just sit here and read it over and over and over...hehe...so yeah i love this poem..ive got one last thing to say....MORE!!!..more poetry from you!!!.. 
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
beautiful poem...i love dthis piece...awesome job...i wish i had something to be remembered if i do depart someday...and WELCOME TO PASSIONS!...hope you share and reply with us more ...bye  i'm addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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keoni Senior Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 850Up in the mountains in the NFC |
Welcome to Passions! This is a very nice poem. Very sweet. Hope you enjoy it around here, I know you will. We all do. Jon "Your anger is a gift"-Rage Against The Machine |
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DarkAngelOfTheStars Member
since 2001-04-21
Posts 255 |
WOW......awesome poem i loved it very nice job....and welcome i hope to see a lot more of your work around and you Dont knock on deaths door ...... ring the bell and run......he hates that |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!! I really enjoyed your first post and i cant wait to see more from you ! Welcome aboard P.S- Check your e-mail for a special message |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Welcome to Passions!! Very well done! Great job here! I enjoyed this a LOT! Hope to see you around more!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
I know I've personally welcomed you already but stil..... WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!! You know I'm already impressed with your style in writing. Hope you keep it up and keep sharing. hi Sweets, Lizzy, Ina, Erin, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Maree, Mic |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
WELCOME!!!  That was an excellent poem, and I am very impressed. Keep it up, and don't worry; people here are VERY kind when they give critisism. Rhonda "Who did that?" "Charlie and Blake." "Who's Charlie and Blake?" "Rhonda and Amy." |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Welcome to Passions! I enjoyed this poem BUNCHES. I can't wait to read more from you. So keep sharing all your work --Marie "You're the girl of my nightmares, erotic and skull-faced. |
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