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Master
Senior Member

since 1999-08-18

Posts 1867
Boston, MA

0 posted 2001-06-14 02:45 PM

To spend the New Year’s Eve together,
We hid away inside your room
And nothing in the world could matter
We stayed up staring at the moon.
The streets were painted in white,
Outside, the ashen flakes were swarming
And though we swore to break the night,
We shared one pillow by the morning.

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2001-06-14 05:06 PM

very nicely done!

anonymous albert ?

Member Elite

since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

2 posted 2001-06-14 05:57 PM

i liked this one as well...great work here

...bye

im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

fearing-laughter
Senior Member

since 2001-04-24

Posts 605
land of cheese (Wisconsin)

3 posted 2001-06-14 06:22 PM

wow...short but sweet. really powerful. i really liked this one, thanks fer sharin it. later
-fear-

stace_co2003
Member

since 2001-03-30

Posts 497
In a dream world

4 posted 2001-06-14 06:45 PM

I like this poem! it's really cute!

I don't have an attitude problem You have a perception problem.

Heaven won't have me and Hell's afraid I'll take over.

keoni
Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 850
Up in the mountains in the NFC

5 posted 2001-06-14 06:51 PM

I liked this one. Although it was short it was good. The ending was nice.
Jon

"Your anger is a gift"-Rage Against The Machine
"Only God can judge me" Tupac Shakur

Ina
Senior Member

since 2000-10-09

Posts 1236
Quebec, Canada

6 posted 2001-06-14 09:11 PM

short. very good work.

anonymousfemale
Member Elite

since 2000-02-02

Posts 2797
Limbo

7 posted 2001-06-15 03:34 AM

New Years Eve is the worst time of the year. Damn it to hell...

Anyway, your pieces are getting very simple but still hold that little magic you always have.

Good on you.

~AF~

Just because I hear voices doesn't mean I'm crazy...SHUT UP IN THERE!!!

Spine Grinder
Senior Member

since 2000-10-28

Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

8 posted 2001-06-15 08:54 AM

i REALLY liked this 1 alot ! good job and keep posting~

fall hard, practice harder not to fall

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

9 posted 2001-06-16 03:03 PM

Very sweet poem. You wrote this well. A true display of what love can be like. I loved it.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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