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Spine Grinder
Senior Member

since 2000-10-28

Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

0 posted 2001-06-06 05:54 PM

Hey all, in my last few poems i wrote about how i couldn't make up my mind between 2 guys, well i've finally made my mind up.so here ya go!

I think I'm in love,
with this one guy.
I think it was at first sight,
or maybe it was his smile or sigh.
He makes me laugh,
and even better, he likes me.
I want the,
"us" to be.
I love when him,
I'm around.
And when he laughs,
I like that sound.
We flirt so much,
I think I'm about to burst.
Even though in love,
he's not my first.
I still love him for him,
no matter what people say.
He's a bad boy,
and I like him that way!

fall hard, practice harder not to fall

quitstaringatmenow
Junior Member

since 2001-06-06

Posts 10

1 posted 2001-06-06 06:10 PM

I really liked your poem. I like it's original sort of feeling. It's really lighthearted and it's a poem that I know I can really relate to. Keep writing, for sure

Dopey Dope

Moderator

Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

2 posted 2001-06-06 06:16 PM

Well done! i liked this one, but watch out for the bad boys....sometimes they break hearts....

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

anonymous albert ?

Member Elite

since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

3 posted 2001-06-06 08:17 PM

you expressed yourself quite nicely...i enjoyed the read...and hope everything works well

...bye

i'm addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

[This message has been edited by anonymous albert ? (edited 06-06-2001).]

Acies

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

4 posted 2001-06-06 08:32 PM

Seems like you've found what you want. That's really good. Hope things stay strong between you both

keep sharing

hi Sweets, Lizzy, Ina, Erin, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Val, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Maree, Michel

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

5 posted 2001-06-10 11:44 AM

I think you've found what you've been looking for

good job!

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