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There's a place
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There's a place |
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Hallucination Member
since 2001-03-18
Posts 419 |
There's a place you want to go, when you're all alone, and so depressed. A place nobody else can find, can touch. A world where you are filt with everything good, going on around and in you. There's no walls, no tight corners, there's as much space as you need. No nightmares, no bad thoughts, it's possible to dream your self away. To a whole different univers. Where time doesn't excist, where there's no such thing as stress. It's deep within your self. |
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the_rescue Member
since 2001-05-23
Posts 316Japan |
that was intresting I liked the concept but inmyself I find turmoil 90% of the time lol. But still a great poem |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I liked this one. I liked what it's about. Good job here.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
yes!...i feel you on this one...a place where i find myself trapped and hard to come out...great poem  ...bye  i'm addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Oyyy i definately know what your saying! Wonderful piece |
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