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I want him to die
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I want him to die |
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Allysa 
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden 
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~author's note: this is about larry, the man who murdered Jesica, her mother (Martha Madewell) and Nathan Marshall. It has nothing to do with Justin. I still love him!~ Went to read the newspaper today. Saw his picture on the front page. Followed the direction to the article about him. The lawyers are all trying to let him live. Did anyone ever think about what he's done? They spelled her name wrong again. How many times do we have to tell them there's only one s in Jesica. I don't want him to live. I'd prefer if he died. Right now. I don't believe in hate or killing people. But he gave me a reason, and I want him to die. I know you're in a better place and though I cannot see your face, I know you're smiling down on me, saying everything's okay. ~R Kelly (I wish) |
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the_rescue Member
since 2001-05-23
Posts 316Japan |
hmm good writing wish I knew a little more about the story though. Nice piece |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Yea i wish i knew a lil more about the story too...this was so sad tho..::hugs:: |
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Empty tears Member
since 2001-03-12
Posts 64 |
Powerful emotion..good xpression of feelings. Well done Death is but an escape from loneliness |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Sweetie...it's ok to feel this way....but please....don't let it consume you.....if you want to see things change then go into law or government and MAKE it change.....I understand your feelings and wish you healing....  ~SEA |
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Allysa
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
It hasn't consumed me. It's just that today she would have graduated from eighth grade and moved onto highschool, and now she never will and it's his fault. I know you're in a better place and though I cannot see your face, I know you're smiling down on me, saying everything's okay. ~R Kelly (I wish) |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
quite powerful...i liked it...hope things are ok? and you feel better ...bye  i'm addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Well done here. Tons of power. Wowness. Stay strong though, You don't want all this rage to kill your internal self. Move on.. *hugs* |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Believe me I do know...mine was a girl named Rosie.....only she never got to graduate from High school.....her death took away our innocence that summer........I still remember her...... |
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Deranger Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 498Somewhere, between here and there |
Yep, people suck. I'm a little confused as well. But i can make enough inferences to get by, Well, i'm sorry for this loss...as unsencere as the sympathy of strangers is. Well, anyway...on to the poem... Raw, ragging...and afraid. Excactly what you must have felt. Spreading insanity, one post at a time |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Allysa~ You have a very good reason to feel this way. But see if I was in that position I would rather have that guy spend his life in jail. Let him rot there. Instead of giving him the quick and easy way out. You opened your feelings up vey well. This was a good way to get your anger out. "If you should die before me, ask if you could bring a friend." [This message has been edited by ERIN (edited 06-06-2001).] |
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Alyssa
since 2001-05-30
Posts 385IM ENGAGED!!!!! |
*hugz* Hey sis, i know i dont know all of the story but i pretty much know the half of it from your poems. And, i think he needs to die to. It is not right what he has done, and the lawyers cant keep him alive if the prosecuting attorney has hard evidence of the murders. If you need to talk email me! love ya sis! ±Ålyssa± "lifes tough, get a helmet" |
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Alexia
since 2001-06-07
Posts 164Sweet And Sassy |
Hey chic! I sorry for what happened! It was a good poem! Hope everything turns out for the best. |
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DarkAngelOfTheStars Member
since 2001-04-21
Posts 255 |
*hugs* powerful poem if you ever need to talk im here and im a good listener most of the time you can im me on aim at PowderPuffGirl2k whatever you wanna talk about im here for ya Dont knock on deaths door ...... ring the bell and run......he hates that |
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