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Secret unkept
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the_rescue Member
since 2001-05-23
Posts 316Japan |
Alright I've got a secret to tell It's driving me crazy I want to yell yeah yeah wait a minute let me explain I know you want to know but deal with the pain Ok anyways right this secret is so grand I'm really not sure if you would understand I'm not saying you have a febble mind really and honestly I'm not being unkind it's just this secret is so simple it's confusing you'll laugh when you hear it, its quite amusing. Shhhh I'm trying to talk be patient will you, I'll tell you if it's the last thing I do. This secret is like a pearl that's priceless you want to keep it secret but you tell nonetheless Like finding candy as a little boy this secret just brought me such joy It's made me happy when my life seems sad I just think about it and life isn't that bad good greif would you please just hold on my explination will soon be gone. Ok let me do some more explaining here the secret I tell you leaves you without fear It takes away the pain in your life and often times removes amounts of strife. It brings joy it brings peace It brings a love that will never cease it's as faithful as the seasons and I love it for all of these reasons. Ok here it is the secret unkept when I first heard it I wept The secret is .... sorry if I told it wouldn't be a secret would it. Ha ha |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
lol...but hey...the flow was very nice and the storytelling was quite enjoying...thanks for sharing  i'm addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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punkrockerrobin
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
it's about me huh babe? lol! hey hun i gots to talk to you so when get on yahoo find me! robin I AM WHAT I AM SO DEAL! |
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knightlyshadows Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 791obscured vision |
lmao JimmAy u be a nut  but its all good. neatoish poem! u got me all wantin to know the secret then u just dropped it ya dodo! thanx bunches  tiff  “A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.” |
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dramaqueen22086 Member
since 2001-05-05
Posts 50Hadlyme, CT |
hey i thought this was really funny, i loved the way you held out the end, to bad there's not really a secret, and if there is i want to know, ...lol i thought it was really good, keep written luv ya ~!kellie!~ |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Meanie  |
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the_rescue Member
since 2001-05-23
Posts 316Japan |
sorry? |
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the_rescue Member
since 2001-05-23
Posts 316Japan |
sorry really did mean to keep the secret |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
hahah i enjoyed this one...it put a smile on my face It flowed nicely and was cute...hehe creative!!! |
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stace_co2003 Member
since 2001-03-30
Posts 497In a dream world |
ahhhhhhhhh, you need to tell a secret right now just so I won't go absolutley insane trying to figure out what the secret could possibly be!!!!!! oh, but the poem was good lol. I'm just glad that now this rainstorm has ended, and I can see the rainbow once again. |
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DarkAngelOfTheStars Member
since 2001-04-21
Posts 255 |
aww you made me read all that for nothing!! grrr why oh why?? i wanna know!!! you know you want to tell me hehe anyways it was a really cute poem *click* its in my library hehe. Great job!!!Dont knock on deaths door ...... ring the bell and run......he hates that |
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