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artemis_selene
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since 2001-05-07

Posts 14
virginia

0 posted 2001-06-04 07:30 PM

haven't posted in a while, but hope you guys like this one...

no love for the ones
that wear the tattered and
dirty gowns

no love for the ones
with their faces painted
like clowns

no love for the ones
who stay in the garish,
colored light

no love for the ones
who remain obscured by
the night.

© Copyright 2001 artemis_selene - All Rights Reserved

~sugarpie313~
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since 2000-09-14

Posts 375
Maine, USA

1 posted 2001-06-04 07:53 PM

this was really good. i love the format!

Valerie

Why do you do what u do to me baby...you know if I could I'd do anything for you, please don't ignore me cause you know I adore you

Dark Enchantress
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2 posted 2001-06-04 08:16 PM

Good job! Hope to see you posting here more often.

"...if you want love you must be love.."
Billy Corgan, Smashing Pumpkins

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3 posted 2001-06-05 07:46 PM

I really liked this one a lot. Well done here. I liked the way you wrote this.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

4 posted 2001-06-09 12:47 PM

Good job here hun! keep it up!

anonymous albert ?

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5 posted 2001-06-09 02:22 AM

i related to this...the poem was full of meaning behind it...i enjoyed this greatly...awesome job

...i liked it a lot...hope to see more...bye

i'm addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

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katherine
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since 2000-06-10

Posts 365
Canberra Australia

6 posted 2001-06-09 07:14 AM

this is so cool. i loved this one.
I liked how each line started with "no love for the ones".
well done

fate can only take you so far, the rest is up to you

lonely*soul
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since 2001-04-05

Posts 396
east haddam (moodus) ct :)

7 posted 2001-06-09 03:22 PM

wow short and simple...but great!!!

i wanted to kill the sexiest person alive, but then i realized suicide is a crime!! :)

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