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little_krazy_poet
Junior Member

since 2001-05-28

Posts 41

0 posted 2001-06-04 05:21 PM

i wrote this to a bunch of people that are just so anoying you know "like the preppy ones"

you can’t see the life that is me
leve me alone and just might leave
I’ll never leave I’ll just live in my self
throughing coshion to the wind
having no care and messing around
death all round my and nothing to fear
look at all of them showing off
even the ones that say thay know me
you don’t know me no ones who say so
I’ve shut my real self away
what you see is a show and just a mask
what do you want to do don’t talk to me
to the person that is reading this
after your done just don’t say a thing
don’t look at me just understand
just think of it this way it is out of your hand
even if I say all of this
your going to say something
your going to turn to and wanan talk
spar me your pity and you guilt
it wasn’t you
you wont be able to fix it
you did nothing to do this to me
this is just me that is what I say
leve me alone
i hate all of you

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

1 posted 2001-06-04 05:44 PM

Well done here. VERY POWERFUL! You write a lot of straight forard powerful stuff.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2001-06-04 06:21 PM

lots of anger here...I hope you are ok

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

3 posted 2001-06-08 10:16 AM

You seem to be a very angry person. You should open up to others. How do you expect them to get to know the real you when you wouldn't even sahre that to them. If you would want to make real friends, you're gonna have to open up.

hi Sweets, Lizzy, Ina, Erin, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Val, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Maree, Michel

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

4 posted 2001-06-11 06:39 AM

Well if this wasnt a s straight forward smack-ya-in-the-face poem i dont know what was!!! LOL Whoa..powerful!

Ina
Senior Member

since 2000-10-09

Posts 1236
Quebec, Canada

5 posted 2001-06-11 09:57 AM

first of all acire....you really wont give up the ina thing will u....lol...thanks

Hey man...preps suck!!!!lol jk. This was awesome work man. very in your face! i like it.

Regina

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