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little_krazy_poet
Junior Member

since 2001-05-28

Posts 41

0 posted 2001-06-04 05:15 PM

i wrote this one when i started a new school

I’m here today
but mentally
I’m not here to stay

I’m trying to just fit in
I guess all of you bought it
I’m giving up I’m fin
it’s not me to try to fit

all that you know my for is a lie
I was fooling you
if you read this don’t cry
leave me alone “ALL OF YOU”

you look at me like you know me
but it’s not the truth It’s just an illusion
at least fitting in for is not the key
and all this my time it has just been a delusion

well what does that mean
and what this say
it means I wish this was just a dream
and I’m going to make over today!!!

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

1 posted 2001-06-04 05:25 PM

I liked this one. Well done here. I liked it!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2001-06-04 06:13 PM

well I can relate to this one.....I had to go to a new school for my senior year of high school....no one talked to me for a month......just the freaks I rode the bus with.....LOL I ended up liking it well enough.

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

3 posted 2001-06-08 10:11 AM

How would these people get to know you when it seems like you wouldn't allow them to. Sometimes we do have to open up. Not all people are bad you know.

keep sharing

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DarkAngelOfTheStars
Member

since 2001-04-21

Posts 255

4 posted 2001-06-08 10:15 AM

ugh i hate starting a new school....i did it 3 times in the last past 3 years and it doesnt help when you're a *shy* person....i can relate.....nice job here

Dont knock on deaths door ...... ring the bell and run......he hates that

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

5 posted 2001-06-11 06:40 AM

I really liked this!! Im rarely anywhere mentally...Good job!

Ina
Senior Member

since 2000-10-09

Posts 1236
Quebec, Canada

6 posted 2001-06-11 09:54 AM

ummmmm....im scared too start my new school now....

thanks for the warning. when I cam to my old school...i didnt have a hard time... maye i wont.
ok im stopping now

great work on the poem!

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