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Teen Poetry #4

thats it

little_krazy_poet
Junior Member

since 2001-05-28

Posts 41

0 posted 2001-06-04 05:00 PM

i just wrote this. and remember writing is a pathway into the mind!!! hhhoooo!

what are you thinking
that’s it
it’s over
your life is (edited)

don’t worry
you’ve tried your best
but now
you need some rest

you kept it together
for a while
but maybe it’s time
for a new stile

if you keep this on
your going to die
and you've seem what happens
when others don’t try

stop trying
your not going to do it
the troubles are to completed
it’s time to quit

there you go
the was easy right
now there's happy things
you can write

NO
i write what i feel
every thing i write
it is for real

if you like it tell me, if you didn't tell me, and if you didn't read it tell me.(man i'm being odd today

[This message has been edited by Dopey_Dope (edited 06-04-2001).]

Dopey Dope