Teen Poetry #4 |
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Scapegoat |
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vixengrl04 Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 495East Haddam, CT ![]() |
Let me know what you think...Thanks! ![]() ~*Nikki*~ ____________________________________________________ ~*Scapegoat*~ Trapped in this hellhole, where nothing goes right. The scapegoat for everyone's problems, I can't escape from their sight. If something goes wrong, you might as well look my way. Of course it's my fault, what else can I say? It's my fault you're so stressed, and my fault when you're sad. And when you shout and scream at me, it's my fault that you're mad. Just take your burdens and throw them ontop of me. There's already so many there, What's another two or three? Nothing has to be your fault, as long as I'm alive. I'm the human scapegoat-Just for you, for as long as I survive. Got more troubles? Give them to me, they'll fit with the others just fine. But the real dilemma does not come up, until I have to deal with mine. ~*Of all the millions of people in the world, I'm just me.*~ |
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banburycross Senior Member
since 2001-03-27
Posts 946viginia |
*HUG* i know how you feel, it's bad times to be the one people dump thngs on. i hope the situation improves and if you do need someone to talk to send me an email. you did a great job on this piece, keep posting your work. Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing. |
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Marshalzu![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Great piece of work... only wish that i had gotten to it first... anyway I really thought I could empathise with this one and if you want anyone to talk to you could e-mail me. Marshal Zu " The tree of liberty must be refreshed from time to time with the blood of patriots" -Thomas jefferson |
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~*brittt*~ Member
since 2001-05-09
Posts 76East Haddam, CT |
Nikki: I already read this the other day in class, but I want to tell ya what i think. This is a really great poem(like all yours ![]() ~britt~ If you live to be 100 years old, I want to live to be 101 so I never have to live a day without you. |
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keoni Senior Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 850Up in the mountains in the NFC |
Awesome. I liked this alot, I totally know how this feels. The whole world has to come crashing down on top of you at once.And usually in my case, it stays there. Great job, I hope things go better for you Jon "Your anger is a gift"-Rage Against The Machine |
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Godsend_1 Member
since 2001-04-19
Posts 247great state of illinois |
*gives nikki and big ole love filled hug* hi hun that was an amazing poem i can relate to it soo well thank you hun love ya bye ben |
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Godsend_1 Member
since 2001-04-19
Posts 247great state of illinois |
woops sorry folks [This message has been edited by Godsend_1 (edited 05-16-2001).] |
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anonymous albert ?![]()
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
this was a very emotional piece...with so much pain in it...i felt it...but see i wish i can help you but all i can say is words so i just hope things gets better and just hang in there thru the toughest situations and things hopefully will get better...so yea..keep writing and thanks for sharing nikki... ![]() if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry" |
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vixengrl04 Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 495East Haddam, CT |
Thank you guys, I really appreciate your compassion! ![]() ~*Nikki*~ ~*Of all the millions of people in the world, I'm just me.*~ |
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Great job on the poem. I really liked it. You are a very talented writer. I always look forward to your poems. ![]() I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
wow...this is really great ![]() |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
~*hugs*~ I think you should stay away from people like that. Though I'm afraid that it my be a family member that you're talking about. ~*hugs*~ I'm so sorry for doubting you Kit ... please forgive me!!!! |
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