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LCsftball16
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0 posted 2001-06-02 09:18 PM





Your suppple lips kissed mine
I could no longer stand
You were pressing your body to mine
And I could no longer push you away
You looked deep into my eyes and touched my soul
I could no longer speak
Your fingertips stroked the jawline of my face
And I could no longer see straight
You left me wanting more
You left me senseless, only the taste of your kiss lingered
I was left speechless, blind, weakened at the knees and broken hearted.
It was all because of you.

© Copyright 2001 LeCrisha - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-06-03 04:02 PM


This was great. I really liked this one. Well done on it! I felt it run through me...you expressed this greatly!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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2 posted 2001-06-04 12:56 PM


I LOVED this!! Truly    
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3 posted 2001-06-04 04:56 PM


Well done I really enjoyed the read  
Zu

LCsftball16
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4 posted 2001-06-04 06:28 PM


thanks!
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