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it was all because of you
| Teen Poetry #4 |
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it was all because of you |
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LCsftball16 Junior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 39 |
Your suppple lips kissed mine I could no longer stand You were pressing your body to mine And I could no longer push you away You looked deep into my eyes and touched my soul I could no longer speak Your fingertips stroked the jawline of my face And I could no longer see straight You left me wanting more You left me senseless, only the taste of your kiss lingered I was left speechless, blind, weakened at the knees and broken hearted. It was all because of you. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This was great. I really liked this one. Well done on it! I felt it run through me...you expressed this greatly!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I LOVED this!! Truly  |
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Marshalzu
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Well done I really enjoyed the read Zu |
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LCsftball16 Junior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 39 |
thanks! |
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