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n e where
Junior Member

since 2001-05-30

Posts 32
Australia

0 posted 2001-06-04 01:53 AM

Maybe not one of my best but oh well..

The grass may be not be greener on the otherside
But I'm sure it grows thicker
And if only I could make it over
I could be so much more bigger
When you come knockin on my front door
I'll send you over there myself
To prove all your crazy theories wrong
To show you I don't need no help

We sit in a room without sunlight
One against each side
Close as we can be to each other
But as far apart as we can hide
I didn't think you were so weak
Hell, I didn't think I could tell
But as far as this room is concerned
I know you too well

One I get out of this
I'll write that best selling book
So you'll stop tripping over your ego
And come take another look
The world's full of people like you
And it's a real big shame
Cuz when I met you I thought' shes different'
But I was sadly mistaken again.

~I'd rather see the world from another angle~ Jewel.
~Well maybe its the time of year
Or maybe it's the time of man
and I don't know who I am
But

DancinQueen

Senior Member

since 2000-07-29

Posts 1092
Kokomo,IN,USA

1 posted 2001-06-04 02:16 AM

i know what u mean..great job here

*dq

**You can't always trust the people you want to**

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

2 posted 2001-06-04 02:57 AM

This will only make you stronger and smarter......I have been through this. I never left her though....she changed, rather said...IMPROVED

I hope all ends well

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

anonymous albert ?

Member Elite

since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

3 posted 2001-06-04 03:14 AM

you wrote this istuation very well...i enjoyed it a lot...keep your ehad up and keep writing

...bye

i'm addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

cherish
Senior Member

since 2001-03-25

Posts 1639
swimming in fairy floss...........

4 posted 2001-06-04 03:56 AM

awwwwwwwwwww...i liked this poem ..so dont you go around saying that you dont!!!...great job on this one..i love the way you write...you described the situation very well and i have to say..AGPFAGP!!!....KEEP POSTING!!..i love reading your work!

"Life is not long and boring,
it's short and compelling." -Javier Agosto-

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

5 posted 2001-06-04 01:03 PM

this is good but it makes me wonder a lot of why questions........

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