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HeAvEnS AnGeL
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since 2001-05-17

Posts 168
The Hot Girl From Canada

0 posted 2001-06-03 01:53 AM

The little boy cryed,
As they took his mommy away.
But he knew in his heart,
He would see her one day.

The "new girl" in school,
Sit's in front of the mirror at night.
Wondering why that bullie,
Just had to pick a fight.

That single mom in the dinner,
Wipes her tables at work.
To put her son through collage,
Her hands are raw and they hurt.

A pretty girl,
Get's called names everyday.
She goes home and crys,
Wishing they would just go away.

A chubby boy,
Ask's a popular girl to the dance.
She laughs in his face,
And tells him he doesn't stand a chance.

A football player,
Likes a "nerd" from school.
But he wont ask her out,
Coz his friends wont think he's cool

A boy examines his bruises,
His face is black and blue.
He wishes his daddy,
Didn't have to be so cruel.

NOTE: I wrote this poem for all the people going through rough times. Please tell me whatcha think.

Don't judge a person untill you have walked a mile in their shoes, this way your a mile away from them, and you have their shoes.

mistic
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since 2001-05-06

Posts 233
Idaho, U.S.A.

1 posted 2001-06-03 02:34 AM

This is really sweet, a bit sad because it's so true, but sweet. I really liked it. Great job. Keep writing. I'm sure this poem will brightne people's days, because you of them, or at least their situation

zarina
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since 2001-05-19

Posts 180

2 posted 2001-06-03 05:06 AM

good poem. It's all true..

AngelPoet87
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since 2001-04-21

Posts 280
Indy

3 posted 2001-06-03 11:03 AM

Oh wow, I like this one alot *clicks the button to add it to her library before she forgets* Reaaallly sad

But a great write

anonymous albert ?

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since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

4 posted 2001-06-03 12:28 PM

you told it very well...im going through different stuff from what you have wrote...but for the ones you wrote it on you did a great job...i hope you write more of these...maybe consider writing a series

...hehe...hope to see more...bye

i'm addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

~sugarpie313~
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since 2000-09-14

Posts 375
Maine, USA

5 posted 2001-06-03 02:52 PM

this is really good. a real eye opener. thanks for the share

Valerie

Why do you do what u do to me baby...you know if I could I'd do anything for you, please don't ignore me cause you know I adore you

Marshalzu

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since 2001-02-15

Posts 2681
Lurking

6 posted 2001-06-03 03:35 PM

Hey great read, very well done I really enjoyed this...Zu

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

7 posted 2001-06-03 04:21 PM

Great job here! I loved this! Simply amazing! You described a few unfortunate things that happen....you did awesome

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

HeAvEnS AnGeL
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since 2001-05-17

Posts 168
The Hot Girl From Canada

8 posted 2001-06-04 12:34 PM

Hey everyone! Thanks for all the replys! I'm actually thinking about turning this poem into a song for my band

Don't judge a person untill you have walked a mile in their shoes, this way your a mile away from them, and you have their shoes.

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