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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733
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Ana(Bitter Truth) Ana You stole my color You made me cold You come between my boyfriend and I You've made him scared, and made me cry Ana You ruin lives You hurt, you hurt and you kill You take, you steal You give hell in return Ana You make me promises You've taken over my life You took advantage of my naivety You preyed on my innocence Ana You are a hell You are an obsession You are a disease You've plagued me Ana You lie You make promises you can't keep You come and go as you please You've enticed me into your disease Ana You are my hell You are my obsession You are my disease* You've plagued me But I need you somehow *Poetic license? Anyone that knows me...knows..well...*sighs* This is truthful, but I'm iffy on that line...anyone understand? Bel "And you're my obsession I love you to the bones And Ana wrecks your life Like an anorexia life" - "Ana's Song", Silverchair [This message has been edited by Isabel Galaxia (edited 06-04-2001).] |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This seems to derive from Anna's Song (Open Fire) by silverchair on the Neon Ballroom Cd. It's not a safe thing to play with....Ana kills. She takes no prisoner's......be careful Isabel  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
Sé. Gracias, no sé qué más decir Dopey... Bel |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
omg this is the weirdest thing..i was singing anna all morning on the train and while i was sitting with friends...im not lying!!!...thats what caught my attention..the title of your poem..and i got curious...yes well i agree with dopes here on this one anna is dangerous..but im glad you realise the battle you are fighting..many dont and it only becomes worse. stick in there hunny you'll find better days to come..  ..the poem was great espcially the personification...good stuff  ..keep writing
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I'm lost.......what's ana? Is it a drug or something? yeah ok fine.....I'm old.....LOL really though what is it? |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
Cherish- Funny huh? I'd been thinking of the song for a couple of days  ..hmm. Thanks SEA- Anorexia nervosa. Thanks again everyone Bel |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Very powerful words here. I hope you're careful, and email me if you ever need soemone to talk to. I enjoyed this poem very much. Thanks for sharing. --Marie "You're the girl of my nightmares, erotic and skull-faced. |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
yea...powerful words...hope things are better ...bye  im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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Linc
since 2001-03-07
Posts 552The Backstreet Boy |
Hey, Yeah I agree the poem is very powerful, I enjoyed reading such great work. "Ana" is a horrid and painful thing and I hope and pray that anyone that is having an encounter with it that they get better good luck and until your next poem -- Linc "Once you reach your original goal it seems that the journey was your real accomplishment." |
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ethel lahootie Member
since 2001-03-06
Posts 143SC, USA |
very good poem kt...no lie. EMAIL ME OK???? tell me whats up in life!?!? i havent talked to u in a while...hope things are ok? wel u kno what i say in response to this poem...b careful bel --jo |
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Raven Skye Member
since 2001-03-03
Posts 112.In a House. |
I liked this...sad message...good poem...I hope you're alright. *×´¨`·.×*Raven Skye*×´¨`·.×* |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Great piece, Bel! Ana takes so much from people but at the same time gives their life meaning. What is really annoying though is when someone says you are anorexic when you're not. I really enjoyed this. once again, another fantastic post. ~AF~ "Kelly's my Hero!" "No, Kelly's your heroine." "Kelly has heroin??" "What?" |
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