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Meggie1986
Junior Member

since 2001-05-22

Posts 41
California

0 posted 2001-06-03 10:26 PM

Speak
Your mind
Allow an insight to your soul
Tell the world how you

Feel
Complex emotions
Don’t try and understand them
If you need a way to vent then

Sing
Your favorite song
Don’t worry if anyone’s listening
You can sound good as long as you

Believe
In a greater power
It will make you feel stronger
And help you if you only

Trust
In what you believe
Trust is the string that tie the universe
And it will allow you to

Know
The question
The question is the most critical part of the answer
And once you find the answer, then

Speak

*One meets his destiny often in the road he takes to avoid it.

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

1 posted 2001-06-03 10:28 PM

I really liked this poem! The format was unique and i liked how the last word of each stanza was the beginning for the new stanza...enjoyable read

fozzyozzy
Member

since 2001-03-15

Posts 336
Lessburg Virginia

2 posted 2001-06-03 10:44 PM

I loved how the stanzas fit together. This is a very good thing you have done

"The heart can think of no devotion
Greater than being shore to ocean
Holding the curve of one position
Counting an endless repetition"
Robert Fr

Dopey Dope

Moderator

Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

3 posted 2001-06-04 12:08 PM

This was awesome!! I loved the formatting of the whole poem. I enjoyed this completely! WOWOWOW......this was awesome. keep them coming!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

4 posted 2001-06-04 01:12 PM

Very cool poem...like the style

Shygirl82
Member

since 2001-02-19

Posts 245
Ilinois

5 posted 2001-06-04 05:25 PM

Very cool...I liked this one alot..the format was one of the things that jumped out at me. Great emotion and powerful message.
Loved it
Always,
~Nikki~

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