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MoeRocko Member
since 2001-04-25
Posts 166West Virginia |
Thinking back in time. Someone said love was blind But they were wrong You just choose to not see when it's right before your eyes You don't care to compromise and give it all. Time and time again, you dissapoint When she believed You haven't given her what she needs You should cherish her love Show her she's right where she belongs You should take care of her heart Before she's gone. When a woman's done, she's done Then she'll go, just when you needed her the most But time and time again, you dissapoint This Is Not Here |
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~sugarpie313~ Member
since 2000-09-14
Posts 375Maine, USA |
i like this one... especially how u chose to end it with one line. gives it that extra OOMPH.  Valerie Why do you do what u do to me baby...you know if I could I'd do anything for you, please don't ignore me cause you know I adore you |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
WEll done Moe....i liked this. Sounds like yer talking about somebody who's not appreciate the love of a girl. I liked it.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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HeAvEnS AnGeL Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 168The Hot Girl From Canada |
Wow this was a very beautiful poem Kepp smiling hunny Don't judge a person untill you have walked a mile in their shoes, this way your a mile away from them, and you have their shoes. |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
ohhhhh very well said! |
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