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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
I'm so confused, torn between two. I love them both, but I don't know what to do. I see their faces, in my dreams. They sew together, what makes my seams. They even cloud, my unfocused vision. But I gotta hurry, I have to make a decision. The summers almost here, and I have to leave one. And with him gone, our love is done. I'm ready to burst, with all this emotion. My love is full, filled with devotion. But if I'm hurt, then I'll be leaving. I'll leave him alone, to deal with his grieving...... |
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AngelPoet87 Member
since 2001-04-21
Posts 280Indy |
Oh how sad! That situation is never fun, but just go with your gut. Remember, if it doesn't FEEL right, it probably ISN'T. Maybe that will help? Anyways, good poem, keep writing! |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Seems like you're confused with men....cuz you seem to dislike some with your Boyfriend thread...but then here you love 2? Anyway....I did like the poem. You expressed it well.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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HeAvEnS AnGeL Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 168The Hot Girl From Canada |
I really liked this poem! I have been in a situation like this before, trust me i know it sux but just make sure you make the rite decision and that your happy with it  Don't judge a person untill you have walked a mile in their shoes, this way your a mile away from them, and you have their shoes. |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
a good poem for a painful situation....well done |
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