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Teen Poetry #4

Upon The Wind

LoneWolf
Member

since 2001-03-10

Posts 384
IL

0 posted 2001-06-03 07:02 PM

“Upon The Wind”

Through the tree tops
And over the hills
The wind does whisper
How I love you still

Over the meadows
And through the streams
The wind does whisper
That my love for you is endless it seems

Past the fires
And within the world
The wind does whisper
Of the my love left untold

Upon the wind
These shall be said
For I never had the strength
So pray that you listen
For my words of love
Upon the wind

It's too bad I'm not as wonderful a person as people say I am, because the world could use a few people like that.
I've learned that even when you th

~sugarpie313~
Member

since 2000-09-14

Posts 375
Maine, USA

1 posted 2001-06-03 08:47 PM

this was very very good. i like it a lot. i love how it was worded. i can't explain why i like it i just do LOL

Valerie

Why do you do what u do to me baby...you know if I could I'd do anything for you, please don't ignore me cause you know I adore you

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

2 posted 2001-06-03 11:42 PM

Not as good as some of your others, but it was good. I did like this one.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

anonymous albert ?

Member Elite

since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

3 posted 2001-06-04 03:28 AM

the last verses werer nice...great job...i enjoyed the read

...bye

i'm addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

cherish
Senior Member

since 2001-03-25

Posts 1639
swimming in fairy floss...........

4 posted 2001-06-04 03:54 AM

awwwwwwww...this is such a sweet poem...i loved it!!...thanks for the read...thank you very much indeed....more MORE says i!!

"Life is not long and boring,
it's short and compelling." -Javier Agosto-

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