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Teen Poetry #4

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short_stuff03469
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since 2001-06-03

Posts 6

0 posted 2001-06-03 06:33 PM

I know you want to go
Yet I don’t see why
You would miss so much
You would never get to drive
Never get to live in your own house
Never graduate from collage
Never travel to places you’ve never been
Never become famous
Never get to see what the future holds
You would be greatly missed
Things would be so different
I would be without my best friend
A piece of me would be missing
School would never be the same
You have effected many people
With you gone
These people would be lost
I know you want to go
Yet I don’t see why

LoveBug

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since 2000-01-08

Posts 4697

1 posted 2001-06-03 06:43 PM

Sounds like your friend is having some big time trouble. You should give this to them to let them know that they are loved, that they are important, and how stupid it would be to do this. If things get really bad, don't hesistate to notify an adult, or even the police. If you need some advice on how to deal with this, e-mail me.

"Men judge generally more by the eye than by the hand, for everyone can see and few can feel."-Machiavelli

short_stuff03469
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since 2001-06-03

Posts 6

2 posted 2001-06-03 07:40 PM

Thanks for the suggestions.

Dopey Dope

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since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

3 posted 2001-06-03 11:38 PM

I really enjoyed this poem, but like erica said, you should get your friend some pro. help or something of the sort. That is something serious....Hope all goes well.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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