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Just my feelings |
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XFalloutX Junior Member
since 2001-05-13
Posts 31NC |
What is this feeling? When I see her My heart starts to beat faster She begins to talk to me Sweat begins to run down my face She walks away I feel this emptiness She passes by me without saying word My heart drops down into my stomach I find myself dreaming of her I can’t stop thinking about her She runs through my head all day I can’t get her out There are no words to describe her beauty Her smile is like the sun it brightens your day Staring into her eyes you can become lost The smell of her hair is the sweetiest smell in the world What I would give to be with her "should I smile because we are friends or cry because thats all will ever be?". *sigh* Im bored....Im all alone...ummmmmm...anyone got msn??? XFall [This message has been edited by XFalloutX (edited 05-29-2001).] |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
i liked this poem...you expressed your feelings well...hope to see more  i'm addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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stace_co2003 Member
since 2001-03-30
Posts 497In a dream world |
I like I like lemme guess....Heather? awwwwww, that's sooo sweet!! you should seriously consider telling her how you feel man...that will release alot of that tension you have building up...although it does create some good poems... hmm...*ponders* I'm just glad that now this rainstorm has ended, and I can see the rainbow once again. |
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XFalloutX Junior Member
since 2001-05-13
Posts 31NC |
some of the greatest poems probably came from depression "should I smile because we are friends or cry because thats all will ever be?". |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I liked this one a lot. Well done!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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chasing rain Senior Member
since 2001-05-15
Posts 737Canada |
*shhhhh, i'm not supposed to be on* anyway... HEY TYPO BOY!!! lol, j/k. Nice poem ya got there...can i have it?  Anyway, yeah...what's couped up in your mind pat? Besides the obvious...cheer up! smile!  *gets hit by a soccer ball and passes out*  "If I find in myself desires which nothing in this world can satisfy, the only logical explanation is that i was made for another world." |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Very nice job |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
*big sighs* this is so incredibly sweet....I love this |
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