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knightlyshadows Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 791obscured vision |
listen to her voice so gentle and soft lapping at you like the sea wave upon wave brushing your toes listen as she speaks hear what she tells you nothing could be more important her words are greater then gold listen to her story pay attention to every word read between the lines she spins details are something you shouldnt forget listen to her song as she raises her voice a perfect harmony that she sings blessed are those that hear it listen to her heart never anything so pure the purity of the innocent from an enchantress listen to her voice as she speaks to you telling you her story singing you her song all from her heart the voice of an angel okays i just added on to it...the fourth and fifth stanza...i felt that SEA was right. so i tried again. hope you like! “A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.” Just leave me alone and give me some space. [This message has been edited by knightlyshadows (edited 05-31-2001).] |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Tiffy girl.....this is beautiful....but I feel like there is more.......or there should be  SEA |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
oooh..this is so nice!!.. ...i loved the fow it had and you know i could hear a 'heavenly' voive read it out to me...  ...agpfagp!!!!..well done tiff i like very much!
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
beautiful words...graet job tiff...bye  i'm addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Well done here. I enjoyed this one tiff!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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stace_co2003 Member
since 2001-03-30
Posts 497In a dream world |
awwww, Tiffy!!! it's cute! I love it! I'm going to add it! to the library thingy!!   Stace I'm just glad that now this rainstorm has ended, and I can see the rainbow once again. |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
beautiful |
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