Teen Poetry #4 |
Life might get tough |
TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
Although thing are not perfect Because of trial and or pain Continue in thanksgiving Do not begin to blame Even though times can get tough Fierce winds are bound to blow God is forever able Hold on to what you know Imagine life without his love Joy would cease to be Keep thanking him for all things Love imparts thee Move out of "camp complaining" No weapons there are known On earth can yeild the power Praise can do alone Until we see him coming Victorious in the sky Will win the race with gratitude eXalting god most high Yes there will be some good time,and yes there will be some bad but... Zion waits in Glory where known are ever sad! Lauren |
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AngelPoet87 Member
since 2001-04-21
Posts 280Indy |
Really good one!!! |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
This was great work lauren. very impressive work! Regina "Take a look at my face, there's no price I won't pay |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
This was such a wonderful poem to read...it was very optomistic and forgiving...not a usual topic or mood of most the poems i read...this was refreshing I really enjoyed it and keep up the good work! |
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Very beautiful poem! I loved it! I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
beautiful poem...i liked the feeling this poem gave me...thanks for sharing it...i like dit lots ...bye lauren i'm addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
....nice work!!...very serene ..i liked reading it over and over.. ..keep posting lauren!!
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stace_co2003 Member
since 2001-03-30
Posts 497In a dream world |
very nice!! really cool! loved it. I'm just glad that now this rainstorm has ended, and I can see the rainbow once again. |
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