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Ina
Senior Member

since 2000-10-09

Posts 1236
Quebec, Canada

0 posted 2001-06-03 03:43 PM

This is another poem....insipred by a song "paper cut" by Lincoln Park.

This paper cut burns
against my skin
acid blood drips
from the cuts along
my dead body
fear bleeds away
filling with nothingness
don't touch me!
leave me alone!
Why do you want to be near
This paranoia is
scratching at the
back of my head
death holds my hand
keeps me comfortated
Pain brushes the tangles
out of my short hair
matted with blood
Another punch in the
ribs will surely kill me
Don't touch me!
stay away!
Don't hurt me anymore!
"it's time too sink
or too swim...."
get your hands off me!
This paranoia is grinding
away reality
Why do u do this to me??!!
Leave
decease
apprehend
arrest
freeze
stop
shut off my body
choke me
belay
get away from me.....
This paranoia is scratching
the back of my head.

Regina

knightlyshadows
Senior Member

since 2001-04-14

Posts 791
obscured vision

1 posted 2001-06-03 03:57 PM

regina! great job on this hun

i love that song..love all of their songs really. I think you did an excellent job on this! very strong. *hugs*
tiff

“A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.”

Where are you when i need you....?

Marshalzu

Member Elite

since 2001-02-15

Posts 2681
Lurking

2 posted 2001-06-03 03:58 PM

Great stuff Regina... I really enjoyed the read although i'm not too sure about Linkin park...
Zu

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

3 posted 2001-06-03 11:29 PM

well done regi...i really liked this one!! Full of power......

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

cherish
Senior Member

since 2001-03-25

Posts 1639
swimming in fairy floss...........

4 posted 2001-06-04 01:35 AM

                                Leave
                               decease
                               apprehend
                               arrest
                               freeze
                               stop
                               shut off my body
                               choke me
wow...i love the words you chose in this...powerful stuff regina!!...linkin park rocks!!!..i love that song!!!..hehehe...part of the reason i checked this out...good work on the poem though!!...first ive read of yours but im impressed already

"Life is not long and boring,
it's short and compelling." -Javier Agosto-

anonymous albert ?

Member Elite

since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

5 posted 2001-06-04 03:22 AM

powerful piece...hit me hard...you did a awesome job

...i really liked this poem...bye ina

i'm addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

Ina
Senior Member

since 2000-10-09

Posts 1236
Quebec, Canada

6 posted 2001-06-04 11:27 AM

thanks for all your replies

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