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thedarkangel
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since 2001-05-12

Posts 74
~*~the cutest~*~

0 posted 2001-06-03 06:15 AM

Everyone's called me Angel
since the day that I was born
I never really questioned it
but now I question more

I have no wings on which to fly
No possible way to soar
But it seems the harder I try
I'm grounded to the floor

I have no golden halo
Of golden light around my head
Just the messy blondish curls
that flatten when I'm in bed

I'm not an innocent Angel
I've seen it all before
Sex, drugs and alcohol
They leave me wanting more

Is there an evil Angel here?
If there is please raise your hand.
I guess I must be the only one
THE DARK ANGEL'S WHO I AM

~*~ps, i won't b posting as much at the mo cos i have my GCSEs and i am cramming 4 them like mad!~*~

tattoos of memories and dead skin on trial for what it's worth it was worth all the while - Green Day

AngelPoet87
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since 2001-04-21

Posts 280
Indy

1 posted 2001-06-03 10:46 AM

This is really cool, I enjoyed it alot!

anonymous albert ?

Member Elite

since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

2 posted 2001-06-03 12:22 PM

great poem...you wrote it very well...

"I have no wings on which to fly
No possible way to soar
But it seems the harder I try
I'm grounded to the floor"

"I'm not an innocent Angel
I've seen it all before
Sex, drugs and alcohol
They leave me wanting more"

...these verses you wrote tooo real...i liked it lots...bye

i'm addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

[This message has been edited by anonymous albert ? (edited 06-03-2001).]

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

3 posted 2001-06-03 04:32 PM

I REALLY loved this poem. Kind of an explanation of your name and so on. I really really liked this one. Well done on it!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

DarkAngelOfTheStars
Member

since 2001-04-21

Posts 255

4 posted 2001-06-03 07:59 PM

omg.....WOW!! loved it.......hehe it was so awesome........hey and it kinda goes with my name..me a dark angel too

Dont knock on deaths door ...... ring the bell and run......he hates that

~sugarpie313~
Member

since 2000-09-14

Posts 375
Maine, USA

5 posted 2001-06-03 08:50 PM

omg this was soooooo freakin awesome!!!!!! i feel the same way when ppl are like "is this your daughter" to my mom and then they go "she looks like such an angel!" i'm like ya okay hahaha but GREAT job!!

Valerie

Why do you do what u do to me baby...you know if I could I'd do anything for you, please don't ignore me cause you know I adore you

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