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LoneWolf
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since 2001-03-10

Posts 384
IL

0 posted 2001-05-12 03:23 PM

“The only one”

Sitting alone wishing for love
But knowing in my heart it can never be
Hoping for someone to come along
But knowing in my soul I am alone

Forgetting life and its sweet dreams
Letting people see the things they want
While they dance around
With false love they flaunt

Powers of mercy
And heavens grand design
For at least a little while in this life
Made you mine

I loved and still love you so
Its really quite simple
If you look to see
That you’re the only one for me

It's too bad I'm not as wonderful a person as people say I am, because the world could use a few people like that.

I've learned that even when you

TearsOfPearls
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since 1999-09-23

Posts 322
Vereeniging, South-Africa

1 posted 2001-05-12 04:21 PM

This poem is kinda sad to me, but was written very well. Nice job, I like it

Keep it up!

Planning big can be a gamble...I have already rolled the dice!

anonymous albert ?

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since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

2 posted 2001-05-12 04:44 PM

another great job on a very good poem..i loiked it as the meaning was sad but written nicely..keep writing..

...?

if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry"

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xShUgArHiGhx

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since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

3 posted 2001-05-13 09:46 PM

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Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

4 posted 2001-05-15 01:21 AM

This poem was simply sweet. Nothing too complex about it, but the feelings within it are very complex to explain within poetry and I feel you did it well. I hope all goes fine with you and her.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

vixengrl04
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since 2001-04-26

Posts 495
East Haddam, CT

5 posted 2001-05-15 12:10 PM

This was sweetly romantic, and I really like reading that kinda poem. Good job.

~*Nikki*~

~*Of all the millions of people in the world, I'm just me.*~

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

6 posted 2001-05-30 06:49 PM

Very romantic indeed. Very sweet words

Great job Lonewolf...keep it up

I'm so sorry for doubting you Kit ... please forgive me!!!!

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

7 posted 2001-06-03 07:29 PM

"I loved and still love you so
Its really quite simple
If you look to see
That you’re the only one for me"

I liked this a lot.....very touching

~SEA

~sugarpie313~
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since 2000-09-14

Posts 375
Maine, USA

8 posted 2001-06-03 08:43 PM

I liked this one a lot. try to keep the syllables the same or about the same in each line, it helps with the flow. but if u don't want to then fine! the poem is still good either way to me

i could send this to a couple guys... hahaha great write.

mos def goin to the library

Valerie

Why do you do what u do to me baby...you know if I could I'd do anything for you, please don't ignore me cause you know I adore you

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