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katherine
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0 posted 2001-06-02 06:57 AM


Today I realised something.
I realised how special and odd
it is that I'm still friends with
people I have known since primary school.
How we're still so close. Our friendship keeps
growing even though I am at a different school, even
though there was a break from each other for a bit.
It's funny the thing that rejoined us was a christmas card sent by a friend that lives in another state. A state that is far far away from here.
The other thing that is odd that it took someone who I have only know for three and a bit years ask me a question to lead me to realise this.
So this is a oem for all of you who I love and can still talk to and feel close to, I hope it never changes. Also a thank you to Alison for asking how I know Jen.

We all make mistakes. We all cause others pain. DEAL

© Copyright 2001 Katie - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-06-02 02:37 PM


nice poem you wrote on this subject...a great tribute...i liked the feelings this poem gave...bye katie

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2 posted 2001-06-02 03:44 PM


I enjoyed this poem very much!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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3 posted 2001-06-02 04:11 PM


Great poem, me and my friend fom primary school are still best friends, and the other day i met friends from primamry school I haven't seen for like two years, and that was great! I'm sure your friend appreciates this poem greatly!

Planning big can be a gamble...I have already rolled the dice!

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4 posted 2001-06-02 07:15 PM


Very raw...refinement leads to complications that simplicity avoids...how fitting is that?  Anyway, i'll stop babbling...good job!

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5 posted 2001-06-06 08:07 AM


Wonderful expression of feelings   Thanks for sharing!
the_rescue
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6 posted 2001-06-06 08:18 AM


ok now I'm sad lol I don't know anyone I went to elementary school with oh yes I do lol nevermind. nice job
katherine
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7 posted 2001-06-08 04:43 AM


i sent this to a friend and she cried. I'm still no sure if that was a good thing or a bad

We all make mistakes. We all cause others pain. DEAL

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