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TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
Pain is what fills my heart these days but who cares? It doesn't matter to them because this pain they do not bare. I pace back and forth in anger but no one asks why, They don't care about the pain I'm going through and how I feel like I'm going to die. No matter how much I do for them it's never enough, But if I wasn't there for them it would make their lifes tough. Because then no one would be there to listen to them complain, But if I keep listening to their stupid problems it will drive me insain. Everyday I just want to get up and leave but I can't just run away, Even though it will drive me crazy stay. I just want someone to truely care about me, But I guess I'm the kind of person my friends want me to be! |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
you need to be the person you want to be....let them like you.....for you  ~SEA |
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katherine Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365Canberra Australia |
the only person you should ever be is yourself. It's not always easy but it's essual to happiness. katie We all make mistakes. We all cause others pain. DEAL |
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TearsOfPearls Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 322Vereeniging, South-Africa |
This is a very good poem, and it's true you know...the only person you should be is yourself. If you keep on doing what you are doing, you will end up forgetting your true self, and you don't wanna do that, cause that after all is the person most people see. Great poem, and hope things go better for u Planning big can be a gamble...I have already rolled the dice! |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
I have to ageee with the previous replies, you have to be yourself before you can ever be happy. I hope things go better for you soon, and I'm glad you shared this with us.  "Men judge generally more by the eye than by the hand, for everyone can see and few can feel."-Machiavelli |
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Ski*Chick Member
since 2001-01-13
Posts 141Fitchburg, Mass, Usa |
Lauren, I liked your poem it was cool. You sound like a good person. bye  ~*~Minna~*~ Learning how to walk, Learning how to talk, are the hardest thing to do in a baby life. Learning how to walk for me is the hardest thing to do. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Erica said it all. Well done though. I liked it.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
awesome lauren I'm sure it will be fine for English. Keep your head up! And remember things that happen now probably wont mean very much when you grow up and look back *dq **You can't always trust the people you want to** |
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TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
Thanx for all your replies it really means a lot and you are all right! Lauren |
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Deranger Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 498Somewhere, between here and there |
Wow. Well, either you haven't posted for a really long time, or my memory is corrupted. Well, at any rate, i can really relate to this; so...i really like it !Spreading insanity, one post at a time |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
"I pace back and forth in anger but no one asks why, They don't care about the pain I'm going through and how I feel like I'm going to die." I loved thos lines....People can be so selfish and mean...I know how you feel and i've been where you are. Stay strong hun ::hugs:: |
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