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stace_co2003
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since 2001-03-30

Posts 497
In a dream world

0 posted 2001-05-29 07:51 PM

Look at the bird in the sky.
It flies so high-
It flies so free...
Sometimes I wish that it was me.

Over the trees,
Flying so free...
for a moment--escaping reality...
and having my own mentality.

Look at the fish swimming in the sea..
it too appears to be free.
Swimming around to it’s delight,
yet it seems to wish for flight.

The birds above
Have all my love.
They are beautiful creatures
with wonderful features.

They glide about the works of man,
though our ways-they do not understand.
But yet the are so free,
And the freedom is what catches me.

To be up in the sky so high,
If I had that freedom, I would fly-
fly up to the top of the clouds,
without looking back or having a doubt.

Yet I would be lonely without a friend
To share this experience with until the end.
And for this I’d pick Andrew!
Why? because he is the one and only Zu!!

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LOL, I couldn't think of an ending...and I figured Zu wouldn't mind, cuz after all, he loves the attention.

I'm just glad that now this rainstorm has ended, and I can see the rainbow once again.

[This message has been edited by stace_co2003 (edited 05-29-2001).]

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2001-05-29 10:38 PM

this is cute....and I like the ending

SEA

XFalloutX
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since 2001-05-13

Posts 31
NC

2 posted 2001-05-29 10:51 PM

Dont well all wish we could be that bird so free. Good job

XX00

"should I smile because we are friends or cry because thats all will ever be?".

*sigh* Im bored....Im all alone...ummmmmm...anyone got msn??? XFall

anonymous albert ?

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since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

3 posted 2001-05-29 10:53 PM

haha...the ending was cute

...and this poem overall pictured a peaceful picture and grea use of imagery...thanks for sharing it

i'm addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

4 posted 2001-05-30 12:16 PM

I hate to repeat but yea the ending was cute. I enjoyed this.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

HeAvEnS AnGeL
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since 2001-05-17

Posts 168
The Hot Girl From Canada

5 posted 2001-05-30 12:32 PM

Lol Lovely ending hun

GReat poem i liked it heaps keep smiling :P

Don't judge a person untill you have walked a mile in their shoes, this way your a mile away from them, and you have their shoes.

cherish
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since 2001-03-25

Posts 1639
swimming in fairy floss...........

6 posted 2001-05-30 12:55 PM

awwwwww...sweet ending...

...where's andrew anyways???...hehehe...i wish i were an ant!!...so little yet so important!!...keep posting stace..

Marshalzu

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since 2001-02-15

Posts 2681
Lurking

7 posted 2001-05-30 02:27 PM

Hey this should be at the top just because it has my name in it... but really all this has got to end... why? because I think my head might explode... Great poem Stace... very cute ending

The one and only Zu.

the_rescue
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since 2001-05-23

Posts 316
Japan

8 posted 2001-05-30 02:59 PM

that was really cool. Way to go Zu

stace_co2003
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since 2001-03-30

Posts 497
In a dream world

9 posted 2001-05-30 04:05 PM

thanks for all of the replies..
and no Zu, I won't stop!! I refuse!!

Stace

I'm just glad that now this rainstorm has ended, and I can see the rainbow once again.

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

10 posted 2001-06-02 05:37 PM

hmmmm......Am I missing something here

good job Stace

I'm so sorry for doubting you Kit ... please forgive me!!!!

TopGunLauren
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since 2000-08-02

Posts 718
California

11 posted 2001-06-02 05:40 PM

Great Job and Keep up the awsome work!
Lauren

Marshalzu

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since 2001-02-15

Posts 2681
Lurking

12 posted 2001-06-02 06:47 PM

Ok back to the top just because my name is in it

xShUgArHiGhx

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since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

13 posted 2001-06-02 06:52 PM

Good job on this one i liked it

Deranger
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since 2000-05-10

Posts 498
Somewhere, between here and there

14 posted 2001-06-02 07:00 PM

Is it me, or does this kinda seem like a song? Anyway, i thought it was beauty. I applaud you.

Spreading insanity, one post at a time

My skull has glowing green eyes!

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