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xShUgArHiGhx

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since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

0 posted 2001-06-02 01:33 AM

You sit and admire,
As they laugh, giggle and stare.
Trying so hard to convince yourself,
That you really just dont care.
You take in a deep breath,
And slowly close the lids of your eyes.
Knowing very well there speaking of you,
But pretend not to realize.
They think your a fool,
For thinking in your ways.
I try and explain to them who you are,
And why i think you live life this way.
They dont see what i see,
I wouldnt expect them to.
They havent gone through the experience,
In which i've gone through.
I feel your pain,
And only wish you'd understand.
That they're only people you think you know,
Who call themselfes friends.
But this lesson is yet to be learned,
I guess its not yet your time.
So in the meantime you take the sadness,
And let out a long sigh.
Hopeless and confused,
You try and hold it in.
That one tear that wants to escape so bad,
The one held deep within.
You finally give up,
And the tear begins to stumble down your face.
And all your left feeling,
Is utter disgrace.

anonymous albert ?

Member Elite

since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

1 posted 2001-06-02 01:42 AM

well written Michele

.the message is clear...and its true in many ways(i would explain but dont wanna make this into anotehr philosophy thread..heheh

)...but anyways...you told it nicely...i enjoyed it a lot...bye

i'm addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

TopGunLauren
Senior Member

since 2000-08-02

Posts 718
California

2 posted 2001-06-02 02:39 AM

I've been reading poems on here for a long time now but I would have to say you write the best poetry on here in my opinion.I don't come on much anymore but when I see that your wrote a new poem i always read it first.You have inspired me to keep writing poems so thankyou.And keep up the awsome work.
Lauren

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

3 posted 2001-06-02 03:25 PM

Well done on this one. I enjoyed it a lot!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

4 posted 2001-06-02 07:21 PM

Thank you all very much

Lauren-- you have no idea how happy that makes me to hear the things you said

Im especially glad i inspire you ...it means a lot to me

Thank you all again for your replies!

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