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corey14
Member

since 2001-05-23

Posts 89
Boston, Mass, U.S.A.

0 posted 2001-05-30 09:40 PM

as the water pases by
just like many things in life
many things come and go
we just forget about so soon
but to cherish is to hold
and that is what we must do to many things
the rivers waters go many places
just as we do
now that you think
it is so easy
elementry school,middle school,high school,collage
it flys right by
it seems like a long time
but when its over
you wish you could go back
but you know you cant
so while you still can
cherish it for all its worth

live a little everyday and when its all over you will have lived a lot

love me and i will love u hate me and i will still like you

corey14
Member

since 2001-05-23

Posts 89
Boston, Mass, U.S.A.

1 posted 2001-05-30 09:55 PM

let me no what u think

live a little everyday and when its all over you will have lived a lot

love me and i will love u hate me and i will still like you

n e where
Junior Member

since 2001-05-30

Posts 32
Australia

2 posted 2001-05-30 10:07 PM

very true poem

~I'd rather see the world from another angle~

stace_co2003
Member

since 2001-03-30

Posts 497
In a dream world

3 posted 2001-05-30 11:49 PM

liked it, but I bet Cherish will love it!

STace

I'm just glad that now this rainstorm has ended, and I can see the rainbow once again.

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

4 posted 2001-05-31 02:34 AM

I was about to say that Stacey.
Well done here. So tru.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

cherish
Senior Member

since 2001-03-25

Posts 1639
swimming in fairy floss...........

5 posted 2001-05-31 02:41 AM

ugh ugh ugh...ok so i've been knocked out of my seat...fell off my chair..&..my arse has been laughed off....all day today..but this..this..oh god!!....wow....do i love this?..NO!..guess what?..i LOVE this!!!..hehehe..i wonder why?

...hahha..no i really did..i relate with the poem soooooooooo much!
...see go and look at one of allans poems...the one where ppl are bagging school...hey!!..i LOVED school...thats why im going back to teach dudes!!....time flies by so fast its amazing .....yesterday i met up with sum of my highschool pals and we had fun laughing and just reminising...you guys still in school dont know what you guys have...hold on to it!!....CHERISH (hehe) IT!...
hahah..i hate using my name..but here i dont think i could use anything else....i loved the poem..rivers waters didnt sound like it was going to be about (me..hehe)..school..but i love it all the same..

"Life is not long and boring,
it's short and compelling." -Javier Agosto-

corey14
Member

since 2001-05-23

Posts 89
Boston, Mass, U.S.A.

6 posted 2001-05-31 03:28 PM

ya i dedicated it to my bro he just finished high school and hes going to collage so that was for him

live a little everyday and when its all over you will have lived a lot

love me and i will love u hate me and i will still like you

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

7 posted 2001-06-02 03:53 AM

it does go by fast...it's scary

~SEA

corey14
Member

since 2001-05-23

Posts 89
Boston, Mass, U.S.A.

8 posted 2001-06-02 08:30 PM

ya i no

live a little everyday and when its all over you will have lived a lot

love me and i will love u hate me and i will still like you

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