Teen Poetry #4 |
Crying on Your Shoulder |
Allysa
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
They can tell me it's not my fault, but who knows if i'll believe them. When tragedy strikes, there's no way of knowing, who is hurting, who is not, who is to blame, who is not. They can tell me I couldn't stop him, but who knows if I'll believe them. When tragedy strikes, there's no way to see, your way through the flames, your way through the tears. They can tell me I could'nt have known, but who knows if I'll believe them. When tragedy strikes, there's no way to say what needs to be said, no way to say "I'm sorry", no way to say "good-bye". They can tell me I'll forget her, because I know I never will. When tragedy strikes, there's no way to avoid feelings, no way to say "it's okay", becuas it's never gonna be okay. They can tell me it'll be okay, but I'll only believe it when you say it. When tragedy strikes, there's no where to lay your head, no shoulder for you to cry on, no where for you to rest. They can tell me not to cry, but that won't stop my tears. When tragedy strikes, tears overflow in your eyes, and there's no where for them to go, except for down my face, and onto your shoulder. I know you're in a better place and though I cannot see your face, I know you're smiling down on me, saying everything's okay. ~R Kelly (I wish) |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Jeez Allysa. I hope that things will be alright. *hugs* Your piece expressed quite a bit of pain. Full of emotions and it was well written. Thanks for the read. ~AF~ Life is a mystery to be lived, not a problem to be solved." |
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Allysa
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
thanks. Everything will be alright. I know you're in a better place and though I cannot see your face, I know you're smiling down on me, saying everything's okay. ~R Kelly (I wish) |
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stace_co2003 Member
since 2001-03-30
Posts 497In a dream world |
*hugs* hope you are alright loved the poem, it shows the emotion... Stace I'm just glad that now this rainstorm has ended, and I can see the rainbow once again. |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
They can tell me it'll be okay, but I'll only believe it when you say it...awwwwwwwwwww!! *hugs*....i cant say anything to make it better...but i can send you hugs to make you feel better right? *sends 9857574 hugs to allysa*.. loved the poem
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
sad...you expressed your feelings very well...i liked it ...as i hope everything goes better...bye i'm addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
*hugs* Allysa luv I hope yer ok. I'm here for you. Very sad. I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
lots and lots of hugs your way ~SEA |
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Alyssa
since 2001-05-30
Posts 385IM ENGAGED!!!!! |
ok, i claim you as my sister!!! long lost sister!! *points at allysa* *bear hugs* *bear hugs* good poem!!!! ±Ålyssa± |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
This was such a beautiful and emotional poem...i really really REALLY liked it So sad tho...::millions of hugs:: |
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