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Powder
Junior Member

since 2000-04-28

Posts 20
Illinois, USA

0 posted 2001-06-01 11:25 PM

I’m Still Here

I am telling you now, so don't say I didn't
I'm just gonna tell you, can't keep it hidden
I'm not turnin' my back for I'm still here
I trusted you once, when skies were clear.

You have it in your head that I lied to you
Deep down inside, you know it's untrue
The secrets we had, we could always confide
The friendship that was is now pushed aside

You know in your heart what I would say
The last thing I'd do to you is betray
Listen to me now and I'll say it true
I'm still here, a friend for you

anonymous albert ?

Member Elite

since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

1 posted 2001-06-02 12:13 PM

nice...and i hope you gave this poem for the person you wrote it for...i think he/she should know...bye

i'm addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

Child of the Stars

Senior Member

since 2000-09-07

Posts 1658
Ann Arbor, MI

2 posted 2001-06-02 07:07 AM

This rocked! Very nice indeed. Friendship kicks.

~Carly

"Go outside and use your own eyes. You'll be surprised to see things you've never been taught..."
~Edouard Manet

katherine
Member

since 2000-06-10

Posts 365
Canberra Australia

3 posted 2001-06-02 08:08 AM

yeah i agree give it to them. It could change the whole situation for the better. nice poem.
katie

We all make mistakes. We all cause others pain. DEAL

TearsOfPearls
Member

since 1999-09-23

Posts 322
Vereeniging, South-Africa

4 posted 2001-06-02 08:50 AM

Powerful piece, nicely written, and I wanna agree with everyone, this person should know that you atill are there.

Keep it up

Planning big can be a gamble...I have already rolled the dice!

LoveBug

Moderator

Member Elite

since 2000-01-08

Posts 4697

5 posted 2001-06-02 11:46 AM

Misunderstandings like this can end friendships, and that's really sad, because friendship is a treasure! I hope you guys work it out! Thanks for sharing.

"Men judge generally more by the eye than by the hand, for everyone can see and few can feel."-Machiavelli

Powder
Junior Member

since 2000-04-28

Posts 20
Illinois, USA

6 posted 2001-06-02 03:05 PM

Thanks for all the replies! I haven't given it to her...yet. I don't know if it would make a difference but I can always try I guess.

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

7 posted 2001-06-02 03:40 PM

Well done....I enjoyed this one. Very sweet poem.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

8 posted 2001-06-06 10:01 PM

This was a nice re-assurance

I think you should give this to the person who this is for. Good job

Heavens Tears

Senior Member

since 2001-03-15

Posts 677

9 posted 2001-06-07 10:46 AM

This was a good poem. I say give it to her soon. She deserves to know how you really feel.

*~*Amanda*~*

My tears roll right down my cheeks, but they all soak into my pillow. I feel kinda sorry for it...

Powder
Junior Member

since 2000-04-28

Posts 20
Illinois, USA

10 posted 2001-06-09 05:15 PM

Thanks, everyone. I plan on giving it to the person soon-maybe things will change-maybe not but it won't hurt!

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