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n e where Junior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 32Australia |
This poem was based on a dream I had...go figure..  Somewhere else In the distance I can hear Here name Being carried along by the wind Deciding to land Right in front of my eyes As if to remind me I am in love with her and it hurts I think I am not sure I can see her figure emerging From the blurry distant lights of the city Into the dark quietness of the woods beyond Sometimes I feel She wants me to touch her In a way that no man can But there is a plain glass window That she sits behind Never letting anyone but herself through I want to get through And show her the beauty she posesses But as I place my hands against the cold glass She steps back In dispair and awkwardness For fear of geting caught By the ones that don't accept. ~I'd rather see the world from another angle~ Jewel. |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
this was very powerful and cool. Nice job. fall hard, practice harder not to fall |
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knightlyshadows Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 791obscured vision |
this was good! i loved the imagery of it and the story behind it. umm as for sybolism...im a weirdO so its prolly not wut u meant but i liked it for wut i got out of it  so woo hoo 4 u! great job on this. keep writin.tiff  “A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.” |
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sexychick Junior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 19Michigan, Bay City |
nice poem very well write, keep on writting and i hope to read more |
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Ski*Chick Member
since 2001-01-13
Posts 141Fitchburg, Mass, Usa |
that was a very nice poem  Minna Learning how to walk, Learning how to talk, are the hardest thing to do in a baby life. Learning how to walk for me is the hardest thing to do. |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
powerful...i liked it lots...nice poem...great job ...bye  i'm addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Well done here. I enjoyed this one.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Dreamy I liked how it was written...nice job |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
cool write |
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