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| Teen Poetry #4 |
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:: just venting :: |
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LCsftball16 Junior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 39 |
hey guyz! this isn't one of my stronger poems... in fact i don't like it at all, but this is how i vent so...and not only do i not like it, but itz long!! It felt good when you were gone I know it's wrong. You thought you were my soul mate But even when your here, you're not You're with him. Today you cried and a part of me said "She deserves it" When we talk, it's nothing of depth You're with him. You told me that I would always come first But I don't All these empty promises because You're with him. Everywhere we go You take the spotlight Guys would die to take his place Yet you're with him Could I for ONCE (in my life) Be like you, surrounded by boys? And for once you'd feel what it's like? Even though you're with him. Could I please have Someone who would like me Without falling in love with you? But you're with him (gives me SOME hope) It's not your fault That I can't understand Why our friendship still means nothing And you're still with him. |
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n e where Junior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 32Australia |
oo i love this poem...its something i can relate to too, i hope things get better for u n' this person! ~I'd rather see the world from another angle~ Jewel. |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Very strong emotions in this. You should go over to teen chat because there is a venting thread in there where you can spill everything! It does wonders, seriously. ~AF~ Just because I hear voices doesn't mean I'm crazy...SHUT UP IN THERE!!! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A good poetic vent works wonders, indeed! |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Good vent, Hope you got it all out. Well done.....Hope all goes well. Sounds like a horrible situation.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
It feels so good to vent!!!! ::sigh:: |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
Ya know, I think this is something every girl at some point in their life feels. Blah to it. It sucks. Nice Vent though. I liked it alot.  |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Yeah...I know this.....it's rotten.....but this is great writing |
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