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Marching to the beat of a different drum
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Marching to the beat of a different drum |
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the_rescue Member
since 2001-05-23
Posts 316Japan |
Who is that there the one marching why does he just stare like no ones watching It's amusing the way he walks and his actions the way he talks and his satisfactions why are they so wierd so out of this earth personally I think there feared they give birth birth to new life an existance of freedom and grace he walks in strife yet a smile covers his face Why cause he marches to the beat of a different drum in the distance he hears the coming locusts hum He hears the fear that rages in the distance and he marches towards it providing resistance Though those around him laugh and ponder his persistance makes them start to wonder wonder about where his hope lies and the reason he continues on despite staring eyes The hum it's coming closer yet he stands strong while others run away saying that he doesnt belong running along against the crowd he's been battered yet he continues on for his hope won't be shattered Why cause he marches to the beat of a different drum in the distance he hears the coming locusts hum he hears the fear that rages in the distance and he marches towards it providing resistance He Grabs a mans arm as he passes by he looks the man in they eye as he begins to cry he has now ended all the mans searching now it's two instead of one marching marching against the flow against the norm because they both know of the coming storm united they stand walking through dying crowd only covering there ears when the screams get loud Why cause they march to the beat of a different drum in the distance they hear the locusts hum they hear the fears that rage in the distance and they march towards it providing resistance. Each man grabs another to go against the flow as they do their eyes begin to glow Now for each grabs one more turning them around showing them the future they have found Tears start to roll down the groups eyes cause they see it coming they see the prize The trumpet sounds and the masses disapear the eight stand now with no fear Why cause they marched to the beat of a different drum they ran the distance against the locust hum they see the king smiling in the distance and they march towards Him the source of their existance Ok this is basically about the whole christian walk in general. this is my faith the reason no matter why the world seems it's closing in I wont follow the crowd cause Im going for a final prize, which is eternal life. So therefore I must go totally against the flow.  The Rescue |
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chasing rain Senior Member
since 2001-05-15
Posts 737Canada |
RIGHT ON DUDE!!!  Really powerful and strong, and the flow was pretty good! Great work, keep posting! *adds it to her library* ¤ ¢H@§ïÑg RåIñ ¤ |
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punkrockerrobin 
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
hey sexy great poem! lol.....well anyways i hope you notice what i'm writting........ robin  I AM WHAT I AM SO DEAL! |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I enjoyed this poem very much. Let me just say that "going against the flow" doesn't give you eternal life. Being a GOOD PERSON does......so if by "going against the flow" you mean yer being a good person, then wonderful. I enjoyed this poem. I liked it.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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