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Teen Poetry #4

Lost in Pain

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Junior Member

since 2001-05-17

Posts 18
Lost in my own world

0 posted 2001-06-01 12:40 PM

I cry all the time
SOmetimes not knowing why
I just feel this pain
I feel this hurt
Not sure how long
Just how long I can take it
I want to end
This feeling inside
The feeling inside
You used to fill
I've lost everything
All I used to fight for
All I was willing
Just to die for.

**One of the most adventurous things left for us is to go to sleep. For no one can lay a hand on our dreams.**

fearing-laughter
Senior Member

since 2001-04-24

Posts 605
land of cheese (Wisconsin)

1 posted 2001-06-01 04:19 PM

hey,
i liked this post. can't believe that i'm the first to respond to it. the situation sucks, but i know how you feel. i think everybody does. hope you feel better!!!! keeeeeep posting, yay!
-fear-

TearsOfPearls
Member

since 1999-09-23

Posts 322
Vereeniging, South-Africa

2 posted 2001-06-01 04:55 PM

Wow, to me this poem was very powerful, very nicely written, I like it.

Hope things work out for u

Planning big can be a gamble...I have already rolled the dice!

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

3 posted 2001-06-02 02:58 PM

Well done here. I felt the raw emotion in this one. Very powerfl indeed. I think it's sad too.....I hope all gets better.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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