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Alyssa
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IM ENGAGED!!!!!

0 posted 2001-06-01 11:06 AM


You are a mystery
I hope I never solve,
...a sparkle of magic,
a twinkle of wonder.
You are the heart of "quiet"
and the tempest of "why"
and most of all- a true friend.

You are the rainbow
trapped in  a soap bubble,
the jingle of beautiful bells,
and the noise of stars

You are a  wisp of fragrance
blown into my life
on the winds of fortune
and held here by the merest
of whims and the strongest of wishes.

You are part of the song
birds sing,
a melody taking wing
in my soul
and the pause in my breath.

You are the first glory
of the morning story,
the great beauty of sunset,
and teh tickle of life in between.

"who am i to one such as you" once you asked,
I smiled and said
"this is who"

hope you guys like it!

[This message has been edited by Alyssa (edited 06-02-2001).]

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Allysa
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1 posted 2001-06-01 04:02 PM


that was real good.  there's nothing else I can think of to say.

I know you're in a better place and though I cannot see your face, I know you're smiling down on me, saying everything's okay. ~R Kelly (I wish)

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2 posted 2001-06-01 04:04 PM


ahh two ppl with the same name.  confuuuuuuuused!!!!! j/k.  hey i really liked this poem. =)  twas very pretty.  keep posting, i know you will.
-fear-

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3 posted 2001-06-02 02:41 PM


Well done here. I enjoyed this one a lot. Very nicely done.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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