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The Drums |
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knightlyshadows Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 791obscured vision |
okays im on a 'bium bium bambalo' by SIGUR ROS kick right now..just listening to this song over and over and over again....so ummm thats why ive been writing bout listening and hearing and stuffish recently..and thats also where the drum part came in on this one...okays im a weirdO so dont ask  listen to the drums as they call you away to come fight for honour defend what is yours hear the sound of drums as they pound away sending out their song to all that will listen sing the song of the drums with the lyrics of death and the quiet chorus of victory shout it out loud for all to hear whisper the story of the drums pass the legends on for when your gone there is no more tell the generations to come listen to the drums pounding out their life to the beat of your heart as you slowly bleed to death die with the sound of the drums the last thing youll ever hear the rhythm that called you to fight the thrum that lead you to your death “A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.” Shhhhhhhhh..... [This message has been edited by knightlyshadows (edited 05-31-2001).] |
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dramaqueen22086 Member
since 2001-05-05
Posts 50Hadlyme, CT |
hey babe, really great work you got here. i thought it was great the way somthing like music can inspire someone, it happens to me all the time. it helps me make more songs for me to record i just hope that one day someone can be inspired by my music, and it can get them to wirte. kepp it up.  ~!kellie!~ |
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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Gosh, I REALLY like this piece! I love the symbolism that you put into this piece, it really pulled me in. Wonderful! Thanks for sharing. "Men judge generally more by the eye than by the hand, for everyone can see and few can feel."-Machiavelli |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
the symbolism was great...you wrote is well...i enjoyed the poem a lot tiff  ...bye  i'm addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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punkrockerrobin
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
tiff that's a good one! hey guess what?............give up! i don'ts use oh boy anymores i gots a new one. robin  you likes? I AM WHAT I AM SO DEAL! |
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lonely*soul Member
since 2001-04-05
Posts 396east haddam (moodus) ct :) |
hey i like this peice...pretty cool, that music, can inspire ya...the beats of the drums..i wouldnt have thought of it good job |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
That song kicks some major ass!  Bium Bium Bambalo, babAy!  Oh and your poem is great too... the ending, how it suddenly turned from a virtuous tone into a dark one, I like that... This song has also made me feel like writing, but more about the lighthouse than anything. I want to do a lighthouse poem! I'll probably end up doing it today, too! Awesome read, Tiffer! ~Allan Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life. |
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fearing-laughter Senior Member
since 2001-04-24
Posts 605land of cheese (Wisconsin) |
hey this poem was awesome!!! sing the song of the drums with the lyrics of death tis my favorite part!!! yay for your poem =) i always enjoy your posts so keeeep posting. MONKEY!!! -fear- |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I enjoyed this piece tiff.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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