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go get your knife |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada 
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If any of you know the Deftones this poem was insipired by their latest cd, "white pony" and the song "knife". The title of the poem is the chorus of the song, "go get your knife"....... "Go Get Your Knife" Why don't you go get your knife, cut through my shell Try to look deeper into my soul Stop judging the exterior of my hard nutshell break me I can't find the words to tell you all of my pain cut me Pull out this scared little child from my darkness hurt me Is what you're doing don't make it hurt worse yell at me "Go get your knife" pry open my heart show me The way to be happy help me Patch this hole in my heart, stop the bleeding watch me disappear into the woodwork Stop me for staying closed and withering away leave me alone, don't care show me you care by letting me go.... Regina "Take a look at my face, there's no price I won't pay |
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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
You give us some very powerful emotions in this piece. The form you used really helps bring out these feelings. Very well-written. I hope you're doing ok! Thanks for sharing.  "Men judge generally more by the eye than by the hand, for everyone can see and few can feel."-Machiavelli |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
powerful and intense emotions was written here...i really liked the whole poem  ...very nice job!...bye  i'm addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? [This message has been edited by anonymous albert ? (edited 05-31-2001).] |
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keoni Senior Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 850Up in the mountains in the NFC |
Very cool. That's definately Deftones influenced, sounds awesome. Now you have that song stuck in my head. I better listen to it when I get home. Jon "Your anger is a gift"-Rage Against The Machine |
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n e where Junior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 32Australia |
i love the imagery used in this poem a good piece of work indeedy ~I'd rather see the world from another angle~ Jewel. |
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lonely*soul Member
since 2001-04-05
Posts 396east haddam (moodus) ct :) |
wow, thats pretty intense..but i like it alot...(i love that song!) and this poem *KiMMiE* |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
This is very emotional Ina. ~*hugs always*~ We'll talk later  I'm so sorry for doubting you Kit ... please forgive me!!!! |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
wow...i like this one a lot....wonderful and powerful imagery ina..you did a pretty darn good job on this..too many adjectives i know..  ...thanks very much for the read....
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
yes, wow! Fantastic!! I love when music inspires |
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Allysa
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
Alright, Ina, that was awesome. There's not much to say, it was just plain awesome. I know you're in a better place and though I cannot see your face, I know you're smiling down on me, saying everything's okay. ~R Kelly (I wish) |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Regi....wow.....amazing. I really really loved this piece of work. I thought you did amazing here. I can't say that I wasn't a bit edgy about the title, and notice how all the mods replied haha....i betcha so were they!...but yea I really enjoyed this one. One of my favs by you. Wow.....very nicely done.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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