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ethel lahootie
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since 2001-03-06

Posts 143
SC, USA

0 posted 2001-05-30 09:45 PM

:waving:HI GUYS! i havent been here in a long time! sorry!...but im back! wel...this isnt that great but hey i tried...tell me what u think.

Starring
With wondering eyes
No one really knows you
Mysterious
Eyes that overwhelm…
Lock
The key to my mind
Is held by your eyes
Strength…
Deepness of my heart
Never filled
Dark…
Is the day that comes
Without
You and your mysterious ways
You…
Starring with
Mysterious eyes
That lock with strength
And are dark without fear

~eThEl

~

© Copyright 2001 ethel lahootie - All Rights Reserved

ethel lahootie
Member

since 2001-03-06

Posts 143
SC, USA

1 posted 2001-05-30 09:47 PM

wel geez im stupid that :waving: is supposed to be this

hehe oopsies!
ethel

n e where
Junior Member

since 2001-05-30

Posts 32
Australia

2 posted 2001-05-30 10:06 PM

i like this poem..it has a nice flow to it
i can also relate to it well

good stuff :p keepit commin

~I'd rather see the world from another angle~

Isabel Galaxia
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since 2000-06-18

Posts 733

3 posted 2001-05-30 10:24 PM

Awesome Jobethel!
And guess what?!?!? NO MORE ODD NATURED PEOPLE!!!!!!!!!!

Bel

stace_co2003
Member

since 2001-03-30

Posts 497
In a dream world

4 posted 2001-05-30 11:44 PM

I really liked this. it's awesome

STace

I'm just glad that now this rainstorm has ended, and I can see the rainbow once again.

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

5 posted 2001-05-31 02:32 AM

Well done here. I like this one a lot.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

cherish
Senior Member

since 2001-03-25

Posts 1639
swimming in fairy floss...........

6 posted 2001-05-31 02:45 AM

hmmm..interesting poem you got here...

...i like the one word lines..good stuff!!!...well done on this one...keep posting.

"Life is not long and boring,
it's short and compelling." -Javier Agosto-

ethel lahootie
Member

since 2001-03-06

Posts 143
SC, USA

7 posted 2001-05-31 09:34 AM

thank u soooo much for replying!!
bel -- NO MORE ODD NATURED PPL EVER! OR GEOMETRY GRADES!! YESS!!

thanks again!

ethel!

SEA

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Member Seraphic

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Posts 22676
with you

8 posted 2001-06-02 03:57 AM

this is kinda cool.....

~SEA

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