Teen Poetry #4 |
turning back the hands of time |
corey14 Member
since 2001-05-23
Posts 89Boston, Mass, U.S.A. |
I wish I could turn back the hands of time to go back to many places i love and miss why does this happen? it goes by so fast I wish I could slow down time to get more out of life to go back in time not to do it over again but to be able to remember so many things for every thing you do hold it in your heart and never let it go live a little everyday and when its all over you will have lived a lot |
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KeLicious New Member
since 2001-05-24
Posts 9PA, USA |
Hey, awesome job on the poem! I can totally understand how u feel, sometimes u just wish u were a kid again, even though i am only 16... but life is rough sometimes, but hang in there, and keep up the great work!! luv, kel |
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corey14 Member
since 2001-05-23
Posts 89Boston, Mass, U.S.A. |
thanks keep leting me no what u think live a little everyday and when its all over you will have lived a lot |
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dramaqueen22086 Member
since 2001-05-05
Posts 50Hadlyme, CT |
i know what you mean, when i lost my freidns last year in a car crash, i wish i could stop time and go back and tell them not to do it. oh how i wish i had said good bye better, oh how i miss them, R.I P. jeff and mickey, luv you two so much. but i thought this was really good, it's reminds me of them. keep up the great written. ~!kellie!~ |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Nicely done here corey. I enjoyed this poem. I often too wish I could turn back the hands of time on certain occasions. I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
i wish i could slow down time too but unfortunately you cant and never will be...good poem |
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stace_co2003 Member
since 2001-03-30
Posts 497In a dream world |
I like this poem. Im with Dopes, I wish I could turn back the hands of time sometimes myself. I'm just glad that now this rainstorm has ended, and I can see the rainbow once again. |
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