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baby0508
Member

since 2001-05-16

Posts 58
Moodus, Connecticut

0 posted 2001-05-31 08:51 AM

I followed all your rules
fell into your little game,
I'd just like to let you know,
that I'll never be the same.

To you, love is just a game,
One that I fell for,
And once you won your game,
"Us" was nevermore.

I still love you, but believe,
That love is so unreal,
because you don't love me back now,
and my heart will never heal.

stace_co2003
Member

since 2001-03-30

Posts 497
In a dream world

1 posted 2001-05-31 08:57 AM

awwwww, give it some time hun. you'll be alright. but I like this poem. I'm gonna add it to my library.

Stace

I'm just glad that now this rainstorm has ended, and I can see the rainbow once again.

~*brittt*~
Member

since 2001-05-09

Posts 76
East Haddam, CT

2 posted 2001-05-31 12:21 PM

Heath- I honestly don't know why you can't just realize you're way too good for him. He doesn't know what he's missing out on, so don't keep giving him what he wants... attention. He's deprived and doesn't deserve any of it.

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

3 posted 2001-05-31 12:48 PM

Nicely done here. I enjoyed this poem a lot. Well done!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

dramaqueen22086
Member

since 2001-05-05

Posts 50
Hadlyme, CT

4 posted 2001-05-31 12:55 PM

hey this is a sad poem i think every one writes sad poems. anyway, i thought it was really good, but don't worry maybe this guy was a jerk if he didn't like you don't worry he isn't good enough for you. you there are other fish in the sea, he wasn't the right one for you... hey i think i know who this is, im not sure but is it heather, britts sis. if it is why did you guys break up anyways. you were so cute together. well, don't get blue over him

there is someone out there for you that will love you back. good job on the poem and i hope something works out.

~!kellie!~

Marshalzu

Member Elite

since 2001-02-15

Posts 2681
Lurking

5 posted 2001-05-31 02:35 PM

Great poem, I really enjoyed the read, No ideas for a title although I suggest you just stick with the first idea that comes into your head.

Zu

anonymous albert ?

Member Elite

since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

6 posted 2001-05-31 04:48 PM

sad and hard situation...i enjoyed the read

...but hope things get better for you...bye

i'm addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

Alyssa

Member

since 2001-05-30

Posts 385
IM ENGAGED!!!!!

7 posted 2001-05-31 09:22 PM

short and sweet sista!
i love it
a title could be "Cement truth"
cause its the hard truth of love.
it bites
love can be evil too.

love is scary!
±Ålyssa±

Allan Riverwood

Member Elite

since 2001-01-04

Posts 3502
Winnipeg

8 posted 2001-06-01 12:27 PM

Aww, this is really upsetting... situations like this, that is.

It's important to realize that you are a valuable person, you don't need reinforcement on that by another person. If you keep your self esteem up there, you'll pull through.

~Allan

Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life.
~Unknown

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