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Take me Down Under with you
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Take me Down Under with you |
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Hallucination Member
since 2001-03-18
Posts 419 |
I’m in a world so cold The rain makes so miserable I wish I was on a plane to Australia. Wish I was, On this totally gorgeous beach Just laying in the sand. Don’t wake me yet if this is just another of my dreams. Down under is were I wanna be No matter what you say I just wanna pack my things and leave This cloudy day. Take me under where the sun shines Where the oceans so beautiful Take me down under with you. I’m day dreaming all the time Down under just sounds so right I wish it weren’t just an hallucination. Wish I were, Watching the sights in Sidney Feeling the warmth the sun. I know everything will Become so true if I just believe. Down under is were I wanna be No matter what you say I just wanna pack my things and leave This cloudy day. Take me under where the sun shines Where the oceans so beautiful Take me down under with you. Down Under, down under, Where everything’s so different. Down Under, down under, Is where’s my love is meant, To stay. Down under is were I wanna be No matter what you say I just wanna pack my things and leave This cloudy day. Take me under where the sun shines Where the oceans so beautiful Take me down under with you. |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
all i can say is beautiful imagery!!!!! regina "Take a look at my face, there's no price I won't pay |
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stace_co2003 Member
since 2001-03-30
Posts 497In a dream world |
that is cute, I love the imagery, and i think that Cherish will like this one too.  Stace I'm just glad that now this rainstorm has ended, and I can see the rainbow once again. |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Hey I will like this one too Stace! I'm an AUSSIE ALSO!!!  One thing I do have to tell you is that Sydney is spelt with a Y and not an I. Sorry but it is a common mistake that REALLY annoys me. Apart from that, it's nice poem.  ~AF~ Life is a mystery to be lived, not a problem to be solved." |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This was a nice poem but didn't you hear? Auzzie land is filled with disease and..ugly women....  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
[email protected] poem was quite beautiful...and the imagery was nice...i liked it...bye  i'm addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
ahhhhhhhh...brian..you can come and stay with me if you like....wait! *shoves dopes out the window*..he knows he wants to come down here...hehehe.. i loved this poem...can i safely say wheres my mp3???...hahha...good job on this one as usual brian...looking forward to more...btw...it was really impressive..
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
 @DopeyLife is a mystery to be lived, not a problem to be solved." |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
this is very cute...I'd like to go there myself someday...... |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Always wanted to visit there meself...but I'm deathly afraid of snakes!!! Ewwww... and Dopey... your so mean to the Aussies!!! They're our friends!! Wanna start a war or something?!?!  Nice poem BTW!! Jenn "If it's wrong to love you, then my heart just won't let me be right, cause I'm drowned in you, and I won't pull through without you by my side." Mari [This message has been edited by Jenn Cirrincione (edited 06-01-2001).] |
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