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chas Member
since 2001-04-08
Posts 101Lynn, ma |
If I could see, Would you be there in front of me? If I could hear, What would you say? If I were to fall, Would you let me be? Or would you check to see if I'm okay? If I was crying, Would you ask me why? Would you wipe my tears away and tell me not to cry? If I don't want to breathe, What would you do? Do you love me enough to make me continue to? Would you believe me if I said, That I can't get you out of my head? Would you believe me if I say, That I would love you everyday? I'll be waiting from now till then, Until you finish answering all my questions. And when you do you won't be through, Cus I'll continue to ask you them again. Because my love for you will never end. |
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Low Man's Lyric Member
since 2001-04-03
Posts 236In a dream |
Awesome poem chas, the whole poem was great but the ending was the icing on the cake! Keep on writing. Give her two red roses, each with a note. The first note says "For the woman I love" and the second, "For my best friend." |
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JBaker515
since 2001-02-28
Posts 458Dartmouth College |
that a boy, i loved ti chas, great job kid. keep writing for me  CHOCOLATE..YUM!!$ Jeff $ : ) |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
great poem...i really enjoyed this whole read...thanks for sharing...  ...?if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry" |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Great poem...i hope you get your questions answered!! |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Well done on this one. Hope all runs smoothly in the future.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Beautiful write. Just don't bother yourself too much with all those questions, it'll only drive you crazy. keep sharing I'm so sorry for doubting you Kit ... please forgive me!!!! |
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stace_co2003 Member
since 2001-03-30
Posts 497In a dream world |
I love this poem. it flows really well, and it's a great poem.  Stace I'm just glad that now this rainstorm has ended, and I can see the rainbow once again. |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Mmm.... chocolate.  |
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