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cherish
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since 2001-03-25

Posts 1639
swimming in fairy floss...........

0 posted 2001-05-31 12:05 PM

..ok this is a stupid poem..haha..meaning it is not meant to be critiqued...just read and think about how stupid cherish is..heheheh..

I scribble your name upon the desk
Over and over
I write it and re-write it
My mind flies away with the
Electric fan overhead.
Im concentrating-
But not on the droning tart out front.
No. My focus is on your name
I want to get it just right.
Just perfect
Perfect in the very way that you are.

Content in engraving you into the wood the hour flies by
People around me gather their books and pens to leave
Great times up, I look back at your name
Formed perfectly upon the brown of the table
It looks wonderful-but lonely
In a mad rush before the next class
i add in large erratic lettering

4 ChErisH.

LMAO @ my stupid poem..hahaha...if i made you laugh them im happy..if i made you shake your head in shame.......in afs words..BOOYA!

stace_co2003
Member

since 2001-03-30

Posts 497
In a dream world

1 posted 2001-05-31 12:13 PM

neato cherish--it's cute!!

but, you're gonna be thrown into a pool in a little bit!!

STace

I'm just glad that now this rainstorm has ended, and I can see the rainbow once again.

cherish
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since 2001-03-25

Posts 1639
swimming in fairy floss...........

2 posted 2001-05-31 12:38 PM

i get thrown in the pool?....omg!!...again!!...great...lets just see about that!...

anonymous albert ?

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since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

3 posted 2001-05-31 02:09 AM

hehe lol...this was cute...just like you

...*thinks*...well not really

...hehe...and i relate to it too...can you believe that

...maybe cuz i do this all the time!

...it was very creative of you writing about this...bye

i'm addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

cherish
Senior Member

since 2001-03-25

Posts 1639
swimming in fairy floss...........

4 posted 2001-05-31 02:11 AM

hahahah...me not cute?...awwwwwwww...nah yer right!!...

..i bet you could relate to this..

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

5 posted 2001-05-31 02:52 AM

Is the poem about me?

cherish
Senior Member

since 2001-03-25

Posts 1639
swimming in fairy floss...........

6 posted 2001-05-31 02:57 AM

is it about you? ...yeah baby...its about you...

...*smacks dopes up the side of his head*..

n e where
Junior Member

since 2001-05-30

Posts 32
Australia

7 posted 2001-05-31 04:23 AM

hey cherish
thanks for tha big WELCOME

i luff this poem i think its something that i would be doing if i was it that situation

*much props*

~I'd rather see the world from another angle~ Jewel.

Hallucination
Member

since 2001-03-18

Posts 419

8 posted 2001-05-31 10:11 AM

Hey Cherish.

Mmmm...
U wanna know somethin' funny.
I got a large Check with a lot of
numbers on it, I had to pay. For what ur writtin' bout.
At list the table thin'.

But... It's cool ( stupid poem )...well..

Your trully
Hallucination "Brian"....

cherish
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since 2001-03-25

Posts 1639
swimming in fairy floss...........

9 posted 2001-05-31 09:11 PM

hahha..thanks guys....brain..you poor dude..the only thing we had to do was clean it up with strong smelly stuff which made your eyes water during lunch time haha...
ne where...its no biggie..

...keep posting guys i enjoy your stuff heaps!

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

10 posted 2001-06-02 04:38 AM

I thought this was great.....

Postman Pat
Junior Member

since 2001-08-05

Posts 23
The Great Land DownUnder

11 posted 2001-08-06 12:36 PM

This made me laugh Cheri-bebe! Should that be "stupid cherish"?
You know that that other name was "Patrick" now wasnt it? LOL...I kid!
It reminded me of highschool for some reason-maybe because i haven't been in any of the Eng. Fac. lecture theaters!But i will one day- just to see whos name you DID write. *winks*

anonymousfemale
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 2797
Limbo

12 posted 2001-09-07 02:58 PM

hehehehe...you're such a psycho..lol

It's a good thing though. Very cute piece.

~AF~

"Kelly's my Hero!" "No, Kelly's your heroine." "Kelly has heroin??" "What?"

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