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n e where Junior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 32Australia |
My love has gone In the silent hours of the night She left without a word And should I be angry I am left with a image Of this hospital bed Shedding tears of loneliness In the darkness of the night My love has gone She's no longer near my side To pose the question of Surviving alone Is something I don't want to face So soon My love has gone And the dark ships of the night Will not bring her home To my side I am alone In this small room As the smell of emptiness Lingers around my aching head My love has gone without saying a word. ~I'd rather see the world from another angle~ |
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fozzyozzy Member
since 2001-03-15
Posts 336Lessburg Virginia |
Consider yourself lucky, there's always the "friends talk". Seriously though(like i can) this is good. I really felt I was in the moment of realization here. Keep postin em here. "The heart can think of no devotion |
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Meggie1986 Junior Member
since 2001-05-22
Posts 41California |
Another very nice poem. You do a great job of puting your emotions into words. *One meets his destiny often in the road he takes to avoid it. |
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stace_co2003 Member
since 2001-03-30
Posts 497In a dream world |
I like this...and I like the thought behind it..though it is sad.  Stace I'm just glad that now this rainstorm has ended, and I can see the rainbow once again. |
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Zengo Junior Member
since 2001-05-27
Posts 31Rogersville, AL |
Another good poem!!! I like the ones about love..... Nick |
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HeAvEnS AnGeL Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 168The Hot Girl From Canada |
Hey hunny, This was a heartwrenching poem :.( I hope things are okay for you and love your not alone I'm standing right behind you holding my arms out to you, you just gotta turn around and fall into them  Don't judge a person untill you have walked a mile in their shoes, this way your a mile away from them, and you have their shoes. |
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n e where Junior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 32Australia |
thanks u HeAvEnS AnGeL ~I'd rather see the world from another angle~ Jewel. |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
awwwwwwwwwwwwwww......my love has gone without saying a word......that is so sad it makes me want to cry...dude be happy turn round and hug angel....  ...enjoyed the poem quite a lot....you're very good at expression..i loved the flow of the poem too...hope to read more!
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Well done,........so sad.......so sad. It was heart felt.....I enjoyed it. Good luck!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
this broke my heart  |
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katherine Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365Canberra Australia |
this is good but so sad. People suck. well done katie We all make mistakes. We all cause others pain. DEAL |
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