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Heavens Tears

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since 2001-03-15

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0 posted 2001-04-16 11:50 AM

Like a wildflower blowing in the warm summers breeze
I look up and thank God for my lifes newfound ease
It will not last: It never has or will
And I know this is true as clouds race over the hill
Then in an instant, this raging storm bounds me
Howling winds blow, and the familiarity astounds me
Because I know I have been through this many times before
But still each time it seems to hurt me more and more
Then the sky opens up and a calm rain begins to fall
These tiny spears sting my face till I can feel nothing at all
Washing away the tears, on my stained cheeks
Until in the distance, the sacred sun peeks
The storm called my life has struck once again
And I know in my heart that its far from the end...

*If the only place I can live my dreams is in my sleep, then I'll sleep forever!*

LoveBug

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since 2000-01-08

Posts 4697

1 posted 2001-04-16 02:25 PM

We all have "storms" in our lives, and you describe this really well. Just remember that a storm can't last forever. Just enjoy the sunlight while you have it!

"Men judge generally more by the eye than by the hand, for everyone can see and few can feel."-Machiavelli
Blame Canada!

Fading Away

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since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

2 posted 2001-04-16 02:39 PM

Ditto LoveBug. I couldn't have said it better myself

This is a very well written poem. Just remember to keep smiling

--Marie

subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart.

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

3 posted 2001-04-16 04:13 PM

Very well written poem! I loved this one. Great job on it.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Child of the Stars

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since 2000-09-07

Posts 1658
Ann Arbor, MI

4 posted 2001-04-16 05:05 PM

Ohh, great imagery in this one. I could almost hear the storm...grrrreat job, and smile!!

~Carly

There are pleasures in poetic pains that only poets know......~Unknown

banburycross
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since 2001-03-27

Posts 946
viginia

5 posted 2001-04-17 09:50 AM

you used a lot of good imagery in this, i liked it a lot. keep posting your work.

Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing.

Linc

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since 2001-03-07

Posts 552
The Backstreet Boy

6 posted 2001-04-17 12:29 PM

Hey,

Well done!!! enough said!

-- Linc

"Once you reach your original goal it seems that the journey was your real accomplishment."

anonymous albert ?

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since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

7 posted 2001-05-26 03:00 AM

*bump*...to page one

this had some amazing imagery...great poem...and thanks for the read...

...?

ahhhhh....i'm addicted to passions in poetry!!!!!

xShUgArHiGhx

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since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

8 posted 2001-05-30 11:43 AM

beautifully written

good job

anonymousfemale
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 2797
Limbo

9 posted 2001-05-30 01:11 PM

I hope things have looked up since you wrote this. It flowed through very nicely.

Keep smiling.

~AF~

Life is a mystery to be lived, not a problem to be solved."
-Van Kaam

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since 2001-05-17

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Lost in my own world

10 posted 2001-05-31 08:38 AM

I love this poem! It's soooo good. keep writing cuz you are really good at it.

**One of the most adventurous things left for us is to go to sleep. For no one can lay a hand on our dreams.**

stace_co2003
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since 2001-03-30

Posts 497
In a dream world

11 posted 2001-05-31 09:20 AM

that's really cute. I hope things are alright for you. *hugs*
I really like this poem, and I hope to hear more from you soon.

Stace

I'm just glad that now this rainstorm has ended, and I can see the rainbow once again.

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

12 posted 2001-06-02 04:30 AM

ah yes, know this

storms always pass......

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